这篇文章有语法错误吗?Tt's my brithday today.My friend and I had a very nice brithday party.At frist,we went out and bougth something that we need for the party.When we come back ,everything was ready.After all day's prepartion,the brithday

这篇文章有语法错误吗?Tt's my brithday today.My friend and I had a very nice brithday party.At frist,we went out and bougth something that we need for the party.When we come back ,everything was ready.After all day's prepartion,the brithday
这篇文章有语法错误吗?
Tt's my brithday today.My friend and I had a very nice brithday party.At frist,we went out and bougth something that we need for the party.When we come back ,everything was ready.
After all day's prepartion,the brithday party began.We helped ourselves and enjoyed the music and the nice food at the party.My friend gave me a present which I want for a long time.After my friend left,I didn't play the computer games as before,because it was going to a new begin.

这篇文章有语法错误吗?Tt's my brithday today.My friend and I had a very nice brithday party.At frist,we went out and bougth something that we need for the party.When we come back ,everything was ready.After all day's prepartion,the brithday
Tt's my brithday today.把首字母T改成I.
When we come back ,everything was ready.
一般过去式的主将从现,而不是一般现在时的主将从现.这句话应该为：
When we came back ,everything would be ready.
My friend gave me a present which I want for a long time.which 引导的定语从句要与主句时态一致,所以want应为wanted.
你写的真不错.让我写一篇英语作文,我都无从下手!