修改一篇English DiaryToday,my mother went for a work,but I and my father do not,so we were stayed at home.I did my homework,It was a little difficult!I spent three hours do it......“Finish!”I said.And I went to my computer room,played compute

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修改一篇EnglishDiaryToday,mymotherwentforawork,butIandmyfatherdonot,sowewerestayedathome.Ididmyhomework,

修改一篇English DiaryToday,my mother went for a work,but I and my father do not,so we were stayed at home.I did my homework,It was a little difficult!I spent three hours do it......“Finish!”I said.And I went to my computer room,played compute
修改一篇English Diary
Today,my mother went for a work,but I and my father do not,so we were stayed at home.I did my homework,It was a little difficult!I spent three hours do it......“Finish!”I said.And I went to my computer room,played computer games,They were fun!
At twelve- ten,I was stop do it,a little white,the meal would ready in a minute.
虽然,Today,I had more fun,but I don't like today!

修改一篇English DiaryToday,my mother went for a work,but I and my father do not,so we were stayed at home.I did my homework,It was a little difficult!I spent three hours do it......“Finish!”I said.And I went to my computer room,played compute
Today,my mother went for work,but my father and I do not,so we stayed at home.I did my homework,It was a little difficult!I spent three hours doing it......“Finished!”I said And I went to my computer room,played computer games,They were fun!At twelve- ten,I
stopped doing it,a little white,the meal would ready in a minute.
but,Today,I had more fun,but I don't like today!

went->went out
I and my father ->my father and I
do not->did not
so 去掉
were去掉
three hours do it-> three hours on it
fun->interesting
was stop do it->stopped doing it
虽然去掉,后有but 了
Today,I had more fun,but I don't like today!
->I was happy today,but I don't like it!