短文改错During the summer holiday this year I got a job at a KFC fast foodDuring the summer holiday this year I got a job at a KFC fast food restaurant and work there for a cleaner.Every day I started off for work early in the morning and got to

短文改错During the summer holiday this year I got a job at a KFC fast foodDuring the summer holiday this year I got a job at a KFC fast food restaurant and work there for a cleaner.Every day I started off for work early in the morning and got to
短文改错During the summer holiday this year I got a job at a KFC fast food
During the summer holiday this year I got a job at a KFC fast food restaurant and work there for a cleaner.Every day I started off for work early in the morning and got to home late in the evening.The job was hard and boring,that made me so tired that I nearly gave in half way.After all,I stuck it with determination.I worked here for three week and finally I finally I finished the job before the new school term began.Now,I understand what labor mean.I think it is really successful experience.
原因也顺便写一下呗
共十处错误
就是为什么错了
还有就是格式：1（ ）改为（ ）（原因）
2（ ）改为（ ）（原因）
后面可以加的

短文改错During the summer holiday this year I got a job at a KFC fast foodDuring the summer holiday this year I got a job at a KFC fast food restaurant and work there for a cleaner.Every day I started off for work early in the morning and got to
第一行：work改为had worked；
第二行：got to改为returned；
第四行：here变成there , week变成weeks ,多了一个finally；
第五行：mean改为means.

........and workED there AS a cleaner. Everyday i started my work early in the morning and went back home late in the evening. The job was tiring and boring(这种清洁工的工作应该是累而不是hard难)，which made me so tire...

全部展开

........and workED there AS a cleaner. Everyday i started my work early in the morning and went back home late in the evening. The job was tiring and boring(这种清洁工的工作应该是累而不是hard难)，which made me so tired that i nearly gave UP half way。(give in更多的表示让步，投降等，用give up更合适) after all是毕竟的意思，表示的让步关系，用在此处不对。But at last, i stuck to it.(with determination累赘 直接删掉 stick to something表示坚持 stick是不及物动词，不能直接加宾语)。 I‘ve been working THERE(前后对应) for there weekS and i finally finished it before the new semester. NOW, i get to know well about what labor means. It's really an meaningful experience, i think(适当变换一下句型 以免单调，此次经验对你而言应该更多的有意义的，因为让你明白了劳动的真正含义，所以用meaningful更妥当)
o(╯□╰)o还以为是楼主自己写的希望把文章改得比较地道呢。。。如果只挑十处的话应该是如下了：
During the summer holiday this year I got a job at a KFC fast food restaurant and work（1，worked应该用过去时态） there for（2，改为as,work..as..固定搭配） a cleaner.Every day I started off for work early in the morning and got to（3，去掉to,home前面不能加to） home late in the evening. The job was hard and boring, that(4，which,非限制性定于从句，只能用which) made me so tired that I nearly gave in half way.After all（5，at last 最终我用我的决心坚持了下来，而不是毕竟，因为前句写到这份工作让我差点想要放弃）,I stuck （6，加上to,stick to sth.坚持做某事，stick是不及物动词）it with determination.I worked here（7，there，应该和前面对应） for three week（8，weeks，三周是附属概念） and finally I finally I finished the job before the new school term began.Now,I understand what labor mean（9，means，主谓一致，labor是单数概念）.I think it is really（10，加上a,experience作经历讲是可数名词，作经验讲才是不可数） successful experience.

收起

第一行：work变成worked for变成as
第二行：work变成worked got to去掉to
第三行：第一个that变成which in变成up
第四行：here变成there week变成weeks

worked ，for改为as got 后的to 去掉， that改为which，gave up ,stuck to，
here改为there，
three weeks，means，
a really 。
During the summer holiday this year I got a job at a KFC fast food restaura...

全部展开

worked ，for改为as got 后的to 去掉， that改为which，gave up ,stuck to，
here改为there，
three weeks，means，
a really 。
During the summer holiday this year I got a job at a KFC fast food restaurant and worked there as a cleaner.Every day I started off for the job early in the morning and got home late in the evening. The job was hard and boring, which made me so tired that I nearly gave up half way.After all,I stuck to it with determination.I worked there for three weeks and finally I finished the job before the new school term began.Now,I understand what labor means .I think it is a really successful experience

收起