I live in a family that there are three paople live happily. My talent show is two paragraphs of "big big world".是病句吗?

I live in a family that there are three paople live happily. My talent show is two paragraphs of "big big world".是病句吗?
I live in a family that there are three paople live happily.
My talent show is two paragraphs of "big big world".是病句吗?

I live in a family that there are three paople live happily. My talent show is two paragraphs of "big big world".是病句吗?
I live in a family where there are three people living happily.这样语法没错了,可是语言很怪,不地道.
另外talent show [简明英汉词典]
n.业余歌手演唱会
你是想说我的才艺表演是唱两段big big world的吧?
表达太中式了...建议你换一种方式.

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I live in a family that there are three paople live happily. 是病句。从句错了，这句定语从句中出现there be和are 2个动词，是不可以的。in a family介词不对。可以改为：I live with my family happily.
My talent show is two paragraphs of "big ...

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I live in a family that there are three paople live happily. 是病句。从句错了，这句定语从句中出现there be和are 2个动词，是不可以的。in a family介词不对。可以改为：I live with my family happily.
My talent show is two paragraphs of "big big world".句中paragraphs 不合适，可以改为sections

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第一句的that改成where
I live in a family where there are three people living happily.
family在句中做地点状语，因此要用where引导定语从句
后一句语法没错 不大地道就是了