My name is *** and my English name is Lydia.I’m 20 and I come from Zhengzhou.I’ m a beautiful girl.There are five people in my family,my parents,my bother,my sister and I.My families are always doing what is best for me.They are always on my side

My name is *** and my English name is Lydia.I’m 20 and I come from Zhengzhou.I’ m a beautiful girl.There are five people in my family,my parents,my bother,my sister and I.My families are always doing what is best for me.They are always on my side
My name is *** and my English name is Lydia.I’m 20 and I come from Zhengzhou.I’ m a beautiful girl.
There are five people in my family,my parents,my bother,my sister and I.My families are always doing what is best for me.They are always on my side.I love each person in my family.I love my sweet warm home.
I graduate from Zhengzhou No.2 High School,It is so beautiful and exciting there,and everyone is kind to me,especially Kim.Kim is one of my best Friends,we often play sports together.
I’m interested in sports,music and mountain climbing.I also enjoy playing soccer.I would love to play with you sometime.
I got sick and tired of learning boring grammar rules and lifeless words.But through hard work in practicing speaking English,I got a great progress.I’d like to share my learning techniques with you,and I will be very glad to answer your letters and be your friend.

My name is *** and my English name is Lydia.I’m 20 and I come from Zhengzhou.I’ m a beautiful girl.There are five people in my family,my parents,my bother,my sister and I.My families are always doing what is best for me.They are always on my side
My name is *** and my English name is Lydia.I’m 20 and I come from Zhengzhou.I’ m a beautiful girl.
There are five people in my family,my parents,my bother,my sister and I.My families are always doing what is best for me.They are always on my side.I love each person in my family.I love my sweet warm home.
I graduate(graduated) from Zhengzhou No.2 High School,(若为逗号,可将it改为which或将逗号改为点号)It is so beautiful and exciting there,and everyone is kind to me,especially Kim.Kim is one of my best Friends,we often play sports together.
I’m interested in sports,music and mountain climbing.I also enjoy playing soccer.I would love to play with you sometime.
I got sick and tired of learning boring grammar rules and lifeless words.But through hard work in practicing speaking(spoken) English,I got a great progress(made great progress).I’d like to share my learning techniques(skills) with you,and I will be very glad to answer(reply to)your letters and be your friend.
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你的中式中文很明显。不过对于高中学生，也许难以避免。下面简单说一点点 ...I graduated from Zhengzhou No.2 High School. It is so beautiful and exciting. Everyone is kind to me, especially Kim.
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I would love to play with you...

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你的中式中文很明显。不过对于高中学生，也许难以避免。下面简单说一点点 ...I graduated from Zhengzhou No.2 High School. It is so beautiful and exciting. Everyone is kind to me, especially Kim.
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I would love to play with you[?] sometime.I got sick and tired of learning boring grammar rules and lifeless[?] words.After practicing speaking English very hard, I got a great progress. I’d like to share my learning experiences with you,...

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