请帮忙检查语法错误I once had a friend who named Bob,but I do not see him anymore because his dishonest.First of all,he lay(撒谎) a lot.For instance,he told his parents that he was studying when he was actually games.Another example was he

请帮忙检查语法错误I once had a friend who named Bob,but I do not see him anymore because his dishonest.First of all,he lay(撒谎) a lot.For instance,he told his parents that he was studying when he was actually games.Another example was he
请帮忙检查语法错误
I once had a friend who named Bob,but I do not see him anymore because his dishonest.First of all,he lay(撒谎) a lot.For instance,he told his parents that he was studying when he was actually games.Another example was he once tried to give me some kind of drug with saying that was just vitamin.In addition,he never kept his promise that he made to people and sometimes even denied them.Once I need him to bring something that I really need for the next day,he promised that he would,but usually I can not get them on time.Moreover,really make me mad was,he said that I told him bring to me on next week.As a result,we were not friends any more
word 很多时态等错误查不出的 因为老外默认他们不会犯这种错误 所以请不要用word
PS，第一句应该是 I once had a friend who named Bob,but I do not want see him anymore because his dishonest.

请帮忙检查语法错误I once had a friend who named Bob,but I do not see him anymore because his dishonest.First of all,he lay(撒谎) a lot.For instance,he told his parents that he was studying when he was actually games.Another example was he
1.I once ---- Once i
2.i do not ---- i didn't
3.because ----because of
4.dishonest ---- dishonesty
5.he lay(撒谎) ---- he lied
6.when he was ---- while he was
7.actually games ---- actually playing games
8.Another example was he ----Another example was that he
9.saying that ----saying it
10.he made ----he had made
11.I need ---- I asked
12.I really need ----I really needed
13.for the next day ----去掉
14.but usually I can not get them ----but actually I didn't get them
15.Moreover,really make me mad was,he said that I told him bring to me on next week.----Moreover,what really drove me sad was that he said i told him to bring it to me on the next week.( drive sb.mad 这一短语搭配更好 )

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I once had a friend who named Bob; but I do not see him any more because of his dishonest. First of all, he lied a lot. For instance, he told his parents that he was studying...

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你把它打到word里面就可以检查语法错误了
I once had a friend who named Bob; but I do not see him any more because of his dishonest. First of all, he lied a lot. For instance, he told his parents that he was studying when he was actually playing games. Another example was that he once tried to give me a kind of drug saying it was just vitamin. In addition, he never kept his promises that he made to people and sometimes even denied them. Once I asked him to bring something that I really needed for the following day. He promised he would but usually I cannot get them on time. Moreover, what really made me mad was that he said that I told him to bring it the next week. As a result, we were not friends any more.

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