Don't you hear sincerity in my voice when I talk?

Don't you hear sincerity in my voice when I talk?
Don't you hear sincerity in my voice when I talk?

Don't you hear sincerity in my voice when I talk?
你难道没有听出我说话语气里的诚恳么?

难道你从我的声音中听不到我说话的真诚吗？

我(对你)情真意切,你竟然无动于衷?
talk 后面最好加上with you
翻译为:我对你说话时,我的声音中....此类,属多余.