求各位帮忙修改一下英文简历的语法Self-assessmentWith strong organizational and people skillsSerious work,easy-going,team spirit.Character cheerful,easy to get along with each other.Easy to accept new things,has the very strong learning

求各位帮忙修改一下英文简历的语法Self-assessmentWith strong organizational and people skillsSerious work,easy-going,team spirit.Character cheerful,easy to get along with each other.Easy to accept new things,has the very strong learning
求各位帮忙修改一下英文简历的语法
Self-assessment
With strong organizational and people skills
Serious work,easy-going,team spirit.
Character cheerful,easy to get along with each other.
Easy to accept new things,has the very strong learning ability.
Education Background
2007/09 -- 2011/07：Jinan University (Business Administration)
Bachelor’s degree
2006/09 -- 2007/06：Heung To College of Professional Studies
Form 6 Graduated
2001/09 -- 2006/06：The Church Of Christ In China Kei Long College
Form 5 Graduated
Work Experience
2011/01 -- 2011/02：Wan Kee Group
Part-time jobs ,Marketing Department
Responsibilities:
Learning product knowledge,Product promotion.
Internal coordination and communication.
Provide after-sales service.
Management products warehouse.
Assist shop sales,finish up the monthly turnover.
2010/01 -- 2010/02：1life1love flower shop
Part-time Sales
Responsibilities:
Sell flowers,decoration of flowers,etc
2008/07 -- 2008/08：PARKnSHOP
Part-time jobs
Responsibilities:
Commodity inspection and provide customers return service.
According to the commodity code was price and the price tag management.
Commodity classification,and according to display method for display.
Offer purchase service.
2006/06 -- 2006/08：WingWah Group
Production assistant
Responsibilities:
Learning production process.
Assist production line work.
Responsible for food production and packaging.
Goods inspection.
Graduates Info.
2010/06：Scholarship
2010/04：Civilization dormitory | class
University:Student union.
Responsibilities:responsible for planning activities,handling the department affairs.
High school:Class vice president and monitor
Responsibilities:Organization class activities
Extracurricular activities:Member of Debate Club ,Member of Computer Club,Basketball association.
Training
2009/08 -- 2009/08：AIA Group Limited
Training Course：Communication skills
Description in Details：The whole process of training students training speaking skills,panel discussions and presentations,etc.
2007/08 -- 2008/08：Zurich Insurance Group
Training Course：Insurance business
Description in Details：Learning insurance principle and of insurance products,insurance agent certificate.
Certificates
2007/08：Insurance agent
Skills
English:Reading and writing basic ,listening and speaking basic
Mandarin:Reading and writing good ,listening and speaking good
Computer skills:MS Word,Excel,PowerPoint
Typing Speed:Eng:(wpm) 45 ,Chinese:(wpm) 50

求各位帮忙修改一下英文简历的语法Self-assessmentWith strong organizational and people skillsSerious work,easy-going,team spirit.Character cheerful,easy to get along with each other.Easy to accept new things,has the very strong learning
I think you need to abreviate. you don't need this Self-assessment, CV should not be like this.
you don't need ro write this kind of skills like Excel or Word because now everybody has the same skills.
about your grammar is ok.
CV should be abreviated like this:
personal informations
educational backround
professional backround
obtained diplomas.
if you have a good skills that will great if you don't have ,don't write anything like Word Excel, just write computer skills
I hope you enjoy .