yesterday after school,I went to downtown with my sister,and we bought four pillows for our sofa.

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yesterdayafterschool,Iwenttodowntownwithmysister,andweboughtfourpillowsforoursofa.yesterdayafterscho

yesterday after school,I went to downtown with my sister,and we bought four pillows for our sofa.
yesterday after school,I went to downtown with my sister,and we bought four pillows for our sofa.

yesterday after school,I went to downtown with my sister,and we bought four pillows for our sofa.
昨天放学后,我和妹妹去市区买了四个沙发上的靠枕.
修改的话,and前不要逗号吧
要不就是.we bought
要不就是and bought ...

实在不知道哪有错,我还以为是翻译
实在不行把 and 改为 then

yesterday , I went to downtown with my sister after school, and we bought four pillows of sofa.

昨天放学后,我和姐姐(妹妹)去商业区为我们的沙发买了四个靠垫。
应改成...I went downtown...
这里downtown作为副词
比如回家应翻译成go home而不是go to home,这里home就作为副词