[11/19] |correct the mistakes in the composition|请挑出这些句子的语法错误/注意仔细看看句中的每个介词是不是有错/还有语句不流畅之处{用词意思不够贴切或者语句表达太绕的}/并改正/.[1]My mother aske
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[11/19] |correct the mistakes in the composition|请挑出这些句子的语法错误/注意仔细看看句中的每个介词是不是有错/还有语句不流畅之处{用词意思不够贴切或者语句表达太绕的}/并改正/.[1]My mother aske
[11/19] |correct the mistakes in the composition|
请挑出这些句子的语法错误/
注意仔细看看句中的每个介词是不是有错/
还有语句不流畅之处{用词意思不够贴切或者语句表达太绕的}/
并改正/
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[1]My mother asked me to stop using computer today.
[2]'Whatever you do on the computer,you mustn't touch the computer at weekdays from now on.'She said to me
[3]It's because my terrible marks in the mid-term examination.
[4]But it's impossible for me to leave the computer.
[5]I never think that my life should be confined to study ONLY.
[6]It's too groundless.
[7]In the case,what do I do on/with the computer?
[8]I paint CGs,write novels,read news,ask questions and of course,including paly games and chatting.
[9]I can't only do exercises,as I urgently want to be well-read and versatile.
[10]What in the exercises are only the repeatable theories and regular ideas.
[11]They may easily cause me to be shallow.
[12]I need different voices.
[13]In fact,the marks in this time's examination was accidental.
[14]I believe it mustn't happen twice.
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[11/19] |correct the mistakes in the composition|请挑出这些句子的语法错误/注意仔细看看句中的每个介词是不是有错/还有语句不流畅之处{用词意思不够贴切或者语句表达太绕的}/并改正/.[1]My mother aske
1]我的母亲要求我停止今天使用计算机.
[2] ‘什么您在计算机做,您不能从现在起接触计算机在周日.‘她对我说
[3]它是,因为我可怕的标记在期中考试.
[4],但留下计算机我是不可能的.
[5]我从未认为应该限制我的生活只学习.
[6]它是太无根的.
[7]在案件,我做什么on/with计算机?
[8]当然我绘CGs,写小说,读新闻,问问题和,包括paly比赛和聊天.
[9],因为我迫切地想要是博学和多才多艺的,我能不仅锻炼.
[10]什么在锻炼是仅反复性的理论和规则想法.
[11]他们也许容易地造成我是浅的.
[12]我需要不同的声音.
[13]实际上,标记在这时间的考试是偶然的.
[14]我相信它不能两次发生.
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