Correcting the mistakesMr Brown come from America.He teaches our English .He can speak some Chinese,but not many .He goes to Chinese classes here.He likes working China very much.He says the Chinese people very friendly.Mr Brown had a daughter and a
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Correcting the mistakesMr Brown come from America.He teaches our English .He can speak some Chinese,but not many .He goes to Chinese classes here.He likes working China very much.He says the Chinese people very friendly.Mr Brown had a daughter and a
Correcting the mistakes
Mr Brown come from America.He teaches our English .He can speak some Chinese,but not many .He goes to Chinese classes here.He likes working China very much.He says the Chinese people very friendly.Mr Brown had a daughter and a son .They both go to the school here,too.But they don't go to the same school .They are good at Chinese.They work very hard at their lesson .Mr Brown loves him very much .
Correcting the mistakesMr Brown come from America.He teaches our English .He can speak some Chinese,but not many .He goes to Chinese classes here.He likes working China very much.He says the Chinese people very friendly.Mr Brown had a daughter and a
1、第一句中come改为comes（第三人称单数）
2、第二句中our改为us（teach是动词,后面必须跟宾语）
3、第三句some改为a little（语言不可以用some来修饰）
4、but not many中的many改much（语言是不可数的）
5、He likes working China应该为He likes working in China
6、He says the Chinese people very friendly改为He says the Chinese people are very friendly（这句话中缺少动词）
7、had a daughter改为has a daughter（这篇文章是一般现在时,时态要一致）
8、go to the school改为go to school（上学的固定搭配词组：go to school）
9、最后一句：改为loves them.
10、倒数第二句：改为at their lessons.