I can't forget the day you went away请英、美语高手看看我的这个意思翻译成英、美语语法对不对“我不会忘记自从你走的那天以后”,还有如果错误了帮我改一下,最好把"the day you went away"不要修改删

I can't forget the day you went away请英、美语高手看看我的这个意思翻译成英、美语语法对不对“我不会忘记自从你走的那天以后”,还有如果错误了帮我改一下,最好把"the day you went away"不要修改删
I can't forget the day you went away
请英、美语高手看看我的这个意思翻译成英、美语语法对不对“我不会忘记自从你走的那天以后”,还有如果错误了帮我改一下,最好把"the day you went away"不要修改删去（前提是"the day you went away"不能在句中用）,如果我要原句改成“我永远不会忘记自从你走的那天以后”这个“Forever”一词应该放在句子的那里?o(∩_∩)o...

I can't forget the day you went away请英、美语高手看看我的这个意思翻译成英、美语语法对不对“我不会忘记自从你走的那天以后”,还有如果错误了帮我改一下,最好把"the day you went away"不要修改删
i can't forget the day since you went away
since,自从

把forever加最后就好了

我永远忘不了你离去的那一天。
i can not forget the day you went away forever、
i will always remembe the day went away forever

i can't forget the day since you went away
同意这个，好在押韵，而且重音也恰到好处
如果你要写诗的话还是选他这个