英语短文改错Without the development of science and technologyWithout the development of science and technology,our world will change a lot of every way in the future.We will live in the cyberspace.If we like,we didn’t need to go out to buy th

英语短文改错Without the development of science and technologyWithout the development of science and technology,our world will change a lot of every way in the future.We will live in the cyberspace.If we like,we didn’t need to go out to buy th
英语短文改错Without the development of science and technology
Without the development of science and technology,our world will change a lot of every way in the future.We will live in the cyberspace.If we like,we didn’t need to go out to buy thing,go to the library to read,see a doctor in the hospital,and so on.To out joy,it is very easily to visit the other stars,such as the moon and Mars.And we will own a tidy and green world because the energy what we use all from the sun.what’s more,any illness can be cured and many people can live long with a healthier body.All those will be true,I think,through our efforts.

英语短文改错Without the development of science and technologyWithout the development of science and technology,our world will change a lot of every way in the future.We will live in the cyberspace.If we like,we didn’t need to go out to buy th
看文章的意思是有了科学技术的进步 第一个without 改为 with
第二个 every way 改为 ways
第三个 文章一直在陈述未来 didn't改为 don't
第四个 thing改为things
第五个 easily 副词不做表语 改为 easy
第六个 Mars 前面也加上the
第七个 use 后面加上 are
第八个 long改为longer 与healthier 对应
第九个 efforts改为effort 印象中没有复数形式
to out joy 应该是你拼写错误了吧
改错题一般九个错误 一个对的
我尽力了,改错题就是多练,熟记语法.

（With） the development of science and technology, our world will change a lot in the future. We will live in the cyberspace. If we like, we (don't) need to go out to buy thing, go to the library to r...

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（With） the development of science and technology, our world will change a lot in the future. We will live in the cyberspace. If we like, we (don't) need to go out to buy thing, go to the library to read, see a doctor in the hospital, and so on. To our joy, it is very (easy） to visit other stars, such as the moon and Mars. And we will own a tidy and green world because the energy what we use all （is） from the sun. what’s more, any illness can be cured and many people can live （longer） with a healthier body.（ l hope it will come true）, through our efforts.
看了五遍了。改了很多，拼写什么的都改在里面

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第二行thing改为things 用复数 第三行the other应去掉the ，the other指两者之间的另一个，常和one搭配，宇宙中不可能只有两个星球 应去掉the 第四行的own 直接用have不是更好吗own指私有。后边because引导的原因状语从句，既然是句子就得有谓语动词，what应改为that作定语，原句改为because the energy that we use a...

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第二行thing改为things 用复数 第三行the other应去掉the ，the other指两者之间的另一个，常和one搭配，宇宙中不可能只有两个星球 应去掉the 第四行的own 直接用have不是更好吗own指私有。后边because引导的原因状语从句，既然是句子就得有谓语动词，what应改为that作定语，原句改为because the energy that we use are all from the sun.
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