Who can help me to modify my article.Dear Sir or Madam,I got shock with your absurd accusation when I read your letter.Firstly,I'm not able to smoke for asthma so I hate smoking in anywhere.Secondly,I don't know who saw me to not wear shoes.I'm not u

Who can help me to modify my article.Dear Sir or Madam,I got shock with your absurd accusation when I read your letter.Firstly,I'm not able to smoke for asthma so I hate smoking in anywhere.Secondly,I don't know who saw me to not wear shoes.I'm not u
Who can help me to modify my article.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I got shock with your absurd accusation when I read your letter.
Firstly,I'm not able to smoke for asthma so I hate smoking in anywhere.
Secondly,I don't know who saw me to not wear shoes.I'm not used to nothing on my feet in public.
Finally,I hope you'd better confirm who breaks this rules and regulations in gym as soon as possible.
Best regards,
David.

Who can help me to modify my article.Dear Sir or Madam,I got shock with your absurd accusation when I read your letter.Firstly,I'm not able to smoke for asthma so I hate smoking in anywhere.Secondly,I don't know who saw me to not wear shoes.I'm not u
Dear Sir or Madam,
I got shocked（shock错了） by your absurd accusation when I read your letter.
Firstly,I can not（can't 好点） smoke because of asthma and I hate smoking （anywhere前不要in ）anywhere.
Secondly,I don't know who have seen（对已经产生影响,建议用现在完成时） me not wearing（看见时是正在发生的 要用进行时） shoes.I'm not used to wearing nothing on my feet in public.
Finally,I hope that you can find out who broke these rules and regulations in gym as soon as possible.（用了hope that从句）
Best regards,
Yours
David.

Dear sir and madam,
I was shocked by your absurd accusation when I read your letter.
Firstly,I can't smoke because of asthma,so I hate smoking in anywhere.
Second...

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Dear sir and madam,
I was shocked by your absurd accusation when I read your letter.
Firstly,I can't smoke because of asthma,so I hate smoking in anywhere.
Secondly,I don't know who had seen me not wear shoes.I was not used to wearing nothing on my feet in public.
Finally,I hope you'd better who broke these rules and regulations in gym as soon as possible.

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