英语作文急求高手帮忙看看有木有语法错误（只有那么多分了,本人英语不好,写得不好,求大神指点应该怎么改进好,明天要交,感激不尽.特意回答问题赚了点分，感激不尽

英语作文急求高手帮忙看看有木有语法错误（只有那么多分了,本人英语不好,写得不好,求大神指点应该怎么改进好,明天要交,感激不尽.特意回答问题赚了点分，感激不尽
英语作文急求高手帮忙看看有木有语法错误（只有那么多分了,
本人英语不好,写得不好,求大神指点应该怎么改进好,明天要交,感激不尽.

特意回答问题赚了点分，感激不尽

英语作文急求高手帮忙看看有木有语法错误（只有那么多分了,本人英语不好,写得不好,求大神指点应该怎么改进好,明天要交,感激不尽.特意回答问题赚了点分，感激不尽
Why do I go to college?In my opinion,the education can let humen having more knwoledges.That is the reasion why I want to be a student of university.And I can learn more and more knowledges in college,while the knowledge can be my power.In addition,I can find a good job in future and have a nice life.To sum up,studying in university is necessary for me.