What would happen without computer in our lifeComputer is useful for our life ,so I can not imagine without computer.If we lose our computer ,we can not connect with our friend in email and talk with each other in Internet.If we lose our computer,we

What would happen without computer in our lifeComputer is useful for our life ,so I can not imagine without computer.If we lose our computer ,we can not connect with our friend in email and talk with each other in Internet.If we lose our computer,we
What would happen without computer in our life
Computer is useful for our life ,so I can not imagine without computer.
If we lose our computer ,we can not connect with our friend in email and talk with each other in Internet.
If we lose our computer,we can not aquire foreign informations or internal information on time.
If we lose our computer ,we can not download music,film and so on to let us relax when we so tired.
If we lose our computer ,It must prevent technology from developing ,as well as bring some difficulties to deal with puzzle promblems.

What would happen without computer in our lifeComputer is useful for our life ,so I can not imagine without computer.If we lose our computer ,we can not connect with our friend in email and talk with each other in Internet.If we lose our computer,we
What would happen without computer in our life
Computer is useful for our life（in our daily life） , so I can not imagine without computer(will the life looks like).
If we lose our(不需要加our,后面都不需要) computer , we can not connect with our friend in（不是in,是by） email and talk with each other in Internet.（你想说聊天是吧?and chat with each other via internet）
If we lose our(删去our) computer, we can not aquire foreign informations or internal information on time（及时是in time）.
If we lose our（删） computer ,we can not download music,film（电影要加s） and so on（so on后面应该是句号,加一个which） to （不要to）let （make）us relax when we so（不要so,so的感情太强烈） tired.
If we lose our（不要our） computer , It must prevent technology from developing （太严重了吧,后面不要逗号）, as well as bring some difficulties to deal with puzzle promblems.
你写的作文过于中国化,买本做文书,好好看看,有时间多背背课文,没事做做翻译.
英语学习要坚持!祝你好运.

！！！~~~no,no,no!!

Without computers ,what will our life look like ? Computers are so necessary for our life that I can't imagine without computers.
If we lose our computers , we can not connect with our friends by ...

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Without computers ,what will our life look like ? Computers are so necessary for our life that I can't imagine without computers.
If we lose our computers , we can not connect with our friends by email or talk with each other on the internet .
If we lose our computers , we can not acquire informations of other countries and areas timely.
If we lose our computers ,we can not download music and films which can make us relaxed when we are tired.
If we lose our computers , we can not solve puzzle problems conveniently.
If we lose our computers , the developing of some technology will stand still .
PS:这是保留你原文基础上做的小小修改和润色，另外提个小小的建议：英文作文中，特别是短文中，尽量不要用排比句，这是中文的习惯，不是英文的。中文中可以加强语气，但在英文中只会显得重复，单调。

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What would happen in our life without computers?
Computers are useful in many ways for our life, so I couldn't imagine how i can survive without computers.
If we don't have our computers, than...

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What would happen in our life without computers?
Computers are useful in many ways for our life, so I couldn't imagine how i can survive without computers.
If we don't have our computers, than we cannot connect with our friends by chatting and emailing. Also, we cannot acquire informations in different areas. Therefore when we are tiresome we cannot download music, movies, and etc. Then it will prevent technology from developing as well as bringing some difficulties/inconvenient to deal with the puzzled problems.

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