英语翻译My name is ***.I graduated from ****school in ** Province.I am approachable and have affinity .As a girl,I am attentive and always pay attentions to detail.But my brain is often filled with all kinds of new ideas.While I am happy to accep

英语翻译My name is ***.I graduated from ****school in ** Province.I am approachable and have affinity .As a girl,I am attentive and always pay attentions to detail.But my brain is often filled with all kinds of new ideas.While I am happy to accep
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My name is ***.I graduated from ****school in ** Province.I am approachable and have affinity .As a girl,I am attentive and always pay attentions to detail.But my brain is often filled with all kinds of new ideas.While I am happy to accept the challenge to take on frustration and stress,I often experience life's ups and downs and learn to get along with myself through going long-distance running alone.Learning music as a regular after-school hobby has enriched my artistic accomplishment.
Paying attention to current events,some things without justice,equality and peace are touch my heart.For example the gap between developing and developed countries is becoming much wider.and China's social security system is not perfect.As more and more people devoting themselves to public service career,in general,the development of public welfare
Is the trend of world development.however,China's related organizations are short of resources,experience ,expertise ,rules and regulations .I will expand my international horizon,,learn about international trends,cultivate critical awareness and accept Advanced values.Such as
the concept of Concerned about environmental protection,development of low-carbon economy and the participation in poverty alleviation.I would also like to
Learning management knowledge and experience,especially mature management experience.
I will continue to improve the artistic quality simultaneously in 某某校.I will start to learn art because I think it can improve my ability in design.In addition,make full use of the platform for this international metropolis to take part in some social welfare activities will deepen the understanding of my moral and make some like-minded friends.Doing appropriate amount of part-time job not only make me Integrate into society,but also develop my own financial ability.I'm sure that the education system and resouce are keys to my goal,and I will never regret to choose X X shool with both of them advanced and perfect.
一楼为中文一稿 希望可以修改的流畅连贯，符合外国人的阅读习惯。

英语翻译My name is ***.I graduated from ****school in ** Province.I am approachable and have affinity .As a girl,I am attentive and always pay attentions to detail.But my brain is often filled with all kinds of new ideas.While I am happy to accep
I am approachable and have affinity .
I am approachable and having affinity.
如果后面用have,就得在and have间加上I,为什么我也不知道.
As a girl,I am attentive and always pay attentions to detail.
attentive 貌似改为careful比较好.
attentions 去掉s.pay attention to 是固定搭配.
detail 用复数details .
But my brain is often filled with all kinds of new ideas.
brain改为head；去掉all；new这里用得感觉不大合适,建议去掉.
While I am happy to accept the challenge to take on frustration and stress,I often experience life's ups and downs and learn to get along with myself through going long-distance running alone.
这句问题有点大 前半句可改为
Of course I am willing to accept the challenges to face frustration and stress.
后半句改的话应为：I often go through the ups and downs of life and learn to get along with myself through running with long-distance alone.
你才多大,就生活的浮浮沉沉?太矫作了也太个人了.故建议去掉.
while 不知你在此是作何意?当.时候?还是然而?前者貌似不通,后者又连不上前文.
Learning music as a regular after-school hobby has enriched my artistic accomplishment.
enriched 改为enhanced比较好.
没时间了.就到这儿.

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我的名字叫***，毕业于**中学。我的个性平易近人，具有亲和力。作为一个女生，我心思细腻且重视细节，却又敢为他人先，大脑常常被各种新奇的想法所充斥。我乐于接受挑战的同时敢于接受挫折和压力，常在长跑的过程中体验起伏的人生和学习自处。学习音乐作为课余一项固定爱好丰富了我的艺术素养。
在关注时事的过程中，我常常被一些现今世界中所存在的不平衡的现象所触动。比如说发展中国家和发达国家之间的差距在...

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我的名字叫***，毕业于**中学。我的个性平易近人，具有亲和力。作为一个女生，我心思细腻且重视细节，却又敢为他人先，大脑常常被各种新奇的想法所充斥。我乐于接受挑战的同时敢于接受挫折和压力，常在长跑的过程中体验起伏的人生和学习自处。学习音乐作为课余一项固定爱好丰富了我的艺术素养。
在关注时事的过程中，我常常被一些现今世界中所存在的不平衡的现象所触动。比如说发展中国家和发达国家之间的差距在拉大，中国的社会保障制度还不完善。越来越多的人才投入公益事业，总的来说是世界发展的潮流，而这些都需要一些国际组织的推动。现今中国的相关组织自身能力弱，缺乏资源，组织化程度不高且缺乏经验和专业知识。我将通过会展经济管理专业的学习扩大国际视野，学习国际潮流，培养敏锐的意识，接受先进的价值观念，如关注环保，低碳经济，参与扶贫的理念。学习管理知识和经验，特别是成熟的管理经验。
在某某校学习专业知识的同时，我将继续提高艺术素养，继续学习音乐和开始学习美术（我认为学习美术有利于提升设计方面的能力）。我会利用某某城市这个国际大都市的平台，参与社会志愿活动来不断较深自己的道德认识。在学校利用中外合作的契机扩大国际视野，学习西方先进的思想文化的同时，我会结交一些志同道合的朋友。适量的兼职既可以使自己更好地融入社会，又可以培养自己的理财能力。
我有志于成为具备服务精神，开阔思路，敏锐洞察力，超前预见性及熟练外语的高端国际人才。我将立足中国，借助国际化的知识和能力，推动中国及国际慈善事业的发展。我相信拥有先进完善教育系统和教育资源的某某校将是我实现人生抱负的不悔选择

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