英语作文求修改 Advertisements can be seen everywhere in o英语作文求修改Advertisements can be seen everywhere in our life.Everything has two sides.The good sides and bad sides.some people think they can find they need informationFor inst

英语作文求修改 Advertisements can be seen everywhere in o英语作文求修改Advertisements can be seen everywhere in our life.Everything has two sides.The good sides and bad sides.some people think they can find they need informationFor inst
英语作文求修改 Advertisements can be seen everywhere in o
英语作文求修改
Advertisements can be seen everywhere in our life.Everything has two sides.The good sides and bad sides.some people think they can find they need information
For instance they can find a job or look for where can buy something they need
so use good mood to see it

英语作文求修改 Advertisements can be seen everywhere in o英语作文求修改Advertisements can be seen everywhere in our life.Everything has two sides.The good sides and bad sides.some people think they can find they need informationFor inst
没什么好改的.就是觉得你最后一句不知道你想表达些什么.语法没错误.如果要得高分些,应该加多 点连续词.同一意思用不同表达
PS这个是课文吧.好熟悉.好像是高三的.

Advertisements can be seen everywhere in our lives.some people can find the information they need such as jobs or somwhere to buy a certain stuff.however,as every coin has two sides,advertisement did ...

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Advertisements can be seen everywhere in our lives.some people can find the information they need such as jobs or somwhere to buy a certain stuff.however,as every coin has two sides,advertisement did make some visible pollution to us. the advertisement paper in every pole did make the city less clean and beautiful.furthermore,some soap operas are forced to give a product a certain shot for a large amount of money being put in the show by the advertiser.

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1.some people think they can find they need information改为-——some people think they can be in need of informations.
2. For instance they can find a job or look for where can buy something ...

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改动情况
1.some people think they can find they need information改为-——some people think they can be in need of informations.
2. For instance they can find a job or look for where can buy something they need —— For instance they can find a job in advertisements or where to buy something they need in advertisements..
3.so use good mood to see it--------Therefore we should see this problem dialectically.

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Advertisements can be seen everywhere in our life.
Everything has two sides, the good side and bad side.
Some people think they can find the information they need in the advertisements.
For instance they can find jobs or find where to buy things they need.
So we need to keep a peaceful mind towards the ads.