how to improve students' mental health part2 求指点语法错误我写的作文的一小段,作文题目是:how to improve students' mental health 求指点语法错误,And the solution to this problem requires the efforts both universities and stu

how to improve students' mental health part2 求指点语法错误我写的作文的一小段,作文题目是:how to improve students' mental health 求指点语法错误,And the solution to this problem requires the efforts both universities and stu
how to improve students' mental health part2 求指点语法错误
我写的作文的一小段,作文题目是:how to improve students' mental health
求指点语法错误,
And the solution to this problem requires the efforts both universities and students themselves.On the part of universities,the mental health course should be added to the curriculum,besides the staff number of the counseling center should be expanded in order to improve the services of mental health.
On the student's part,they should try to face the reality life and find out the causes of depression.
先请教这些,后面待续.
Expect above ,students should commuicate more with their friends,teachers and parents,find betterr ways to cope with and solve problems,and set realistic aims for their life.

how to improve students' mental health part2 求指点语法错误我写的作文的一小段,作文题目是:how to improve students' mental health 求指点语法错误,And the solution to this problem requires the efforts both universities and stu
the efforts both universities and students themselves
应该是the efforts of
the staff number of the counseling center 应该是the number of the staff in the counseling center should be enlarged
On the part of universities 应该是 In terms of universities
face the reality life and find out the causes of depression 应该是face the reality and find out the causes of their depression.
On the student's part应该是 In terms of the student's
Expect above 应该是In addition to the above,
students should commuicate more with their friends,teachers and parents,find betterr ways to cope with and solve problems,and set realistic aims for their life.
应该是students should commuicate more with their friends,teachers and parents.They should try to find better ways to deal with their problems and then solve them.Also,they should set realistic goals for their future life.
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第一行，1最好不要用“and”开头。2应该是the efforts FOR both...
on the part of universities最好用“for the university",更简洁
On the students' part, 1一样的问题。可以改成On the students' side或是for the students 2“face the realit...

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第一行，1最好不要用“and”开头。2应该是the efforts FOR both...
on the part of universities最好用“for the university",更简洁
On the students' part, 1一样的问题。可以改成On the students' side或是for the students 2“face the reality life”应该为“face the reality OF life"，要添加介词
最后，“expect above”不太地道，可以改为“Furthermore”或“In addition”或“besides”等等。

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