英语翻译这个是我用机器翻译的,帮我改一改,使语句通顺一点.原文：电子商务作为一种以计算机网络为基础的全新的商 务模式,它不可避免的面临着一系列的安全问题.因此在构筑网络 安全解

英语翻译这个是我用机器翻译的,帮我改一改,使语句通顺一点.原文：电子商务作为一种以计算机网络为基础的全新的商 务模式,它不可避免的面临着一系列的安全问题.因此在构筑网络 安全解
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这个是我用机器翻译的,帮我改一改,使语句通顺一点.
原文：电子商务作为一种以计算机网络为基础的全新的商 务模式,它不可避免的面临着一系列的安全问题.因此在构筑网络 安全解决方案中一定要注重一个整体的策略 本文在分析电子商务存在的安全安全问题和我国电子商务安全现状的基础上,阐述了电子商务安全体系结构,电子商务安全是以策略为指导、技术为基础、管理 为核心组成的体系结构.电子商务安全体系对于整个电子商务安全的实现是关重要的.并且在此基础上提出了解决电子商务安全的对策,解决电子商务安全的对策主要有完善法律法规体系、管理体系、计算机网络安全策略,教育疏导
翻译：E-commerce as a computer network based on the new business model,it inevitably faced with a series of safety problems.Build in network security solutions must focus on an overall strategy Based on the analysis of e-commerce security security issues and China's e-commerce security situation on the basis of e-commerce security architecture,E-commerce security strategy is based on the guidance technology,the management of the core components of the architecture.Electronic system for the entire e-commerce security clearance is the realization of an important.And on this basis a solution for secure e-commerce strategy E-commerce security solution countermeasures mainly perfect laws and regulations,management systems,computer network security strategy.education and persuasion

英语翻译这个是我用机器翻译的,帮我改一改,使语句通顺一点.原文：电子商务作为一种以计算机网络为基础的全新的商 务模式,它不可避免的面临着一系列的安全问题.因此在构筑网络 安全解
E-commerce ,as a computer network based on the new business model,is inevitably faced with a series of safety problems.Therefore,we must focus on an overall strategy when working out the solutions to the network safety problems.
Based on the analysis of the e-commerce security issues and current situation of e-commerce security in China,this article explains the structure of e-commerce security system.
E-commerce security consists of a system which is guided by the strategy,based on the technology and regarding the management as a core.
E-commerce security system is crucial to the entire achievement of the e-commerce security.
Also,on this basis,a countermeasure to solve the e-commerce security problems has been raised,mainly including perfect laws and regulations systems,management systems,computer network security strategies,education and persuasion.

人工和电脑翻译的最大区别就是语序。
As a new computer network based business model, E-commerce inevitably faces a series of safety problems, thus an integrated strategy must be in place when a network security plan...

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人工和电脑翻译的最大区别就是语序。
As a new computer network based business model, E-commerce inevitably faces a series of safety problems, thus an integrated strategy must be in place when a network security plan solution is made.Based on the analysis of e-commerce security issues and those of the current China situation, this article explains the system structure of e-commerce security. E-commerce is a system guided by policies, based on technology and operated by management. The system control plays an important role in achieving the security of e-commerce, and suggests possible solutions to the e-commerce security: to enhance the legislation system, management system, computer network security, to educate and guide ...

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原文：电子商务作为一种以计算机网络为基础的全新的商 务模式，它不可避免的面临着一系列的安全问题。因此在构筑网络安全解决方案中一定要注重一个整体的策略 本文在分析电子商务存在的安全安全问题和我国电子商务安全现状的基础上,阐述了电子商务安全体系结构, 电子商务安全是以策略为指导、技术为基础、管理为核心组成的体系结构。电子商务安全体系对于整个电子商务安全的实现是关重要的。并且在此基础上提出了解决电子商务...

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原文：电子商务作为一种以计算机网络为基础的全新的商 务模式，它不可避免的面临着一系列的安全问题。因此在构筑网络安全解决方案中一定要注重一个整体的策略 本文在分析电子商务存在的安全安全问题和我国电子商务安全现状的基础上,阐述了电子商务安全体系结构, 电子商务安全是以策略为指导、技术为基础、管理为核心组成的体系结构。电子商务安全体系对于整个电子商务安全的实现是关重要的。并且在此基础上提出了解决电子商务安全的对策，解决电子商务安全的对策主要有完善法律法规体系、管理体系、计算机网络安全策略，教育疏导
翻译：E-commerce, which is a computer network based on the new business model, has inevitably faced with a series of safety problems. Therefore, one must focuses on an overall strategy while forming network security solutions. Based on the analysis of e-commerce security issues and the situations in China, this article explains the body structure of e-commerce's security system. The core of the system's structure is composed of strategy as the guidance, technology as the base, and management as the core. E-commerce security system is imperatively important in the succession of e-commerce security. In addition on this basis, countermeasures on the drawbacks of the solution which mainly includes suitable laws' regulation systems, management systems, computer network security strategy. and lack of education arises.
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我尽力了~~虽然不是最正确的，但句子的语法是没有错的！

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