One of the most precious love in the world is theparents’love.As a student .We should learn the value of love fromour parents.Not only they are theclosest relatives,but they have afford a lot for us.From many years ago to now,my family have been ha
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One of the most precious love in the world is theparents’love.As a student .We should learn the value of love fromour parents.Not only they are theclosest relatives,but they have afford a lot for us.From many years ago to now,my family have been ha
One of the most precious love in the world is theparents’love.
As a student .We should learn the value of love fromour parents.Not only they are theclosest relatives,but they have afford a lot for us.
From many years ago to now,my family have been havinga special dinner every Saturday evening .We gathered together and I talkedabout my situations or some bad things and my parents will try to put forwardsome suggestions .So I had never been faced troubles alone .
Now,the university entrance examination is coming .Iremain diligence and tolerate in order to attend a good university.If I can beadmitted by the university ,I will try my best to study so that my parentscould happy and be proud of me.
只要有一丁点语法错误就揪出来,如果可以的话帮忙修改一下~
作文题目是感恩父母 the most precious love
One of the most precious love in the world is theparents’love.As a student .We should learn the value of love fromour parents.Not only they are theclosest relatives,but they have afford a lot for us.From many years ago to now,my family have been ha
第三行,afford不怎么合适,一般指买的起或者负担的起,可改成sacrificed
第四行,from many years ago to now,一般不这么表达吧,从过去一直到现在until now或者until today就行了
既然都现在完成现在时了,后面we gathered, talked about就不用过去了呀,至少以后还会发生,用将来时吧.
第六行,faced 前面been不要、
第七行,remain后面你又是名词又是动词的还用and连在一起,diligent and tolerant
最后一行,happy 前面be忘了吧?