Correcting the mistakesLast Saturday was my brithday.My teachers and classmates have a birthday party for me.That day will be the happiest day of me when a party began,the teacher lighted the candles and let me blow them out.All of the teachers and f
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Correcting the mistakesLast Saturday was my brithday.My teachers and classmates have a birthday party for me.That day will be the happiest day of me when a party began,the teacher lighted the candles and let me blow them out.All of the teachers and f
Correcting the mistakes
Last Saturday was my brithday.My teachers and classmates have a birthday party for me.That day will be the happiest day of me when a party began,the teacher lighted the candles and let me blow them out.All of the teachers and friends gave me good wishes,"Happy birthday to you ""All the best!"and so on.Then we sang the song "Happy Birthday."I cut cake into pieces and gave them to everyone.They also gave me bautiful presents.I thank very much.I'm from the city of Erguna.I study in Zhen Hua Middle School in Halar.I'm a boarder.My parents don't stay me.So my teachers look like my parents and classmates look like my brothers and sisters.I will never forget the birthday party of this year.
Correcting the mistakesLast Saturday was my brithday.My teachers and classmates have a birthday party for me.That day will be the happiest day of me when a party began,the teacher lighted the candles and let me blow them out.All of the teachers and f
1、第二句have改had（时态是一般过去时）
2、第三句That day will改为That day would
3、第三句of me改of my life（of me的话,意思根本不通）
4、They also gave me bautiful presents那句.bautiful改为beautiful（没有bautiful这个词的）
5、I thank very much那句改为I thank them very much.（具体语法参考Thank you very much.）
6、My parents don't stay me中,改为don't stay with me
7、第三句中when a party began改为when the party began
8、倒数第二句So前面的句号改逗号,So改成小写.
我找不出来了,你自己再找找看吧~