don't give up,keep going on,or you'll regret it.这句话句式对吗?

don't give up,keep going on,or you'll regret it.这句话句式对吗?
don't give up,keep going on,or you'll regret it.这句话句式对吗?

don't give up,keep going on,or you'll regret it.这句话句式对吗?
非常对!充满正能量!
别放弃,继续加油,否则你会后悔的!

开头应该大写吧！