英语作文,帮我检查检查!My National DayI had a very happy National Day!The National Day is my country's brithday.I feit very proud and proud.On the National Day.My parents and I went to the Purple Ma Ling Park .There are many people.There is
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英语作文,帮我检查检查!My National DayI had a very happy National Day!The National Day is my country's brithday.I feit very proud and proud.On the National Day.My parents and I went to the Purple Ma Ling Park .There are many people.There is
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My National Day
I had a very happy National Day!The National Day is my country's brithday.I feit very proud and proud.On the National Day.My parents and I went to the Purple Ma Ling Park .There are many people.There is very beautiful and very fun.In the morning.My parents and I played game and had a picnic.In the afternoon,we bought a China flag.In the end,we saw a film,the film is very wonderful!We were very happy!
This is my National Day!
英语作文,帮我检查检查!My National DayI had a very happy National Day!The National Day is my country's brithday.I feit very proud and proud.On the National Day.My parents and I went to the Purple Ma Ling Park .There are many people.There is
后面不是用的过去时吧,was were之类的
my country 不如换成motherland （祖国） there is very fun？ 应该是something is very fun那里的fiag 你是想要说国旗吧？国旗是national flag。wonderful 是不能very修饰的，试试quite，不用形容词也可以的。