高手帮我把这句改通顺点.这句语法应该有错...Thirdly,the possible reason of the change is that the China’s new generations focus more on entertained consumption ,furthermore,having been influenced by the Chinese concept ‘face’ a

高手帮我把这句改通顺点.这句语法应该有错...Thirdly,the possible reason of the change is that the China’s new generations focus more on entertained consumption ,furthermore,having been influenced by the Chinese concept ‘face’ a
高手帮我把这句改通顺点.这句语法应该有错...
Thirdly,the possible reason of the change is that the China’s new generations focus more on entertained consumption ,furthermore,having been influenced by the Chinese concept ‘face’ and Western advance-consumption.读起来特别扭 ==帮我改改吧

高手帮我把这句改通顺点.这句语法应该有错...Thirdly,the possible reason of the change is that the China’s new generations focus more on entertained consumption ,furthermore,having been influenced by the Chinese concept ‘face’ a
Thirdly,the possible reason for the change is that China’s new generations focus more on entertainment consumption .Besides,they have been influenced by the Chinese concept of ‘face’ and Western advance-consumption.

feeling131411 把最主要的错误改正了。

Thirdly, the possible reason of the change is that the China’s new generations focus more on entertained consumption , furthermore,（ they have also been influenced） by the Chinese concept ‘face’ and W...

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Thirdly, the possible reason of the change is that the China’s new generations focus more on entertained consumption , furthermore,（ they have also been influenced） by the Chinese concept ‘face’ and Western advance-consumption.
这样行不？另外advance-concumption什么意思？ 是advanced consumption吗？好像也不是。知道中文就好了。

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