My family is so important to me that I can give up everything.My family is so important to me that I can give up everything for it for it is the indispensable part of my life ,the number one in my life.
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My family is so important to me that I can give up everything.My family is so important to me that I can give up everything for it for it is the indispensable part of my life ,the number one in my life.
My family is so important to me that I can give up everything.
My family is so important to me that I can give up everything for it for it is the indispensable part of my life ,the number one in my life.
My family is so important to me that I can give up everything.My family is so important to me that I can give up everything for it for it is the indispensable part of my life ,the number one in my life.
首先,第一个can最好改成would...因为是您“愿意”,远比“可以”要通顺 ：）
第二点,第二个for（您用于表原因的那个）可以考虑改成as或者because.语法上没有错误,但是重复降低了句子的易懂性和美感 ：）
第三点仅供参考...the number one in my life可以去掉...虽然大家都明白您的意思,但是并不特别通顺.导致句子缺乏完整性...实在想要的话,变成it is the most indispensable part of my life （我生活中最不可或缺的部分）,这就足够阐述你的观点了啦.
不过.all goods :)
改成give up anything else for it如何？
我看这句话很正确。