This week is the last week before the Christmas day.求检查文章语法错误This week is the last week before the Christmas day.People are all prepare for the Christmas and waiting for it.I decided to go Vancouver during boxing day because I want

This week is the last week before the Christmas day.求检查文章语法错误This week is the last week before the Christmas day.People are all prepare for the Christmas and waiting for it.I decided to go Vancouver during boxing day because I want
This week is the last week before the Christmas day.求检查文章语法错误
This week is the last week before the Christmas day.People are all prepare for the Christmas and waiting for it.I decided to go Vancouver
during boxing day because I want to buy some cheap cloth.
I will go Vancouver with my friends and we made a plan for this trip.We decided to get up at about 5:30 in the morning and catch up the first ferry at about 7 and
we will arrive in Vancouver at about 8:30.Then we will go Robson Street and Pacific Center Shopping Mall..They are both good place for shopping.We are
going to have lunch at Richmond .There are a lot of Chinese there and I want to try some sea food there.
We didn't have a good time when we first went to Vancouver.We didn't prepared enough for the trip and we just look around.We didn't got enough time to
shopping.This time is different because we prepared enough.

This week is the last week before the Christmas day.求检查文章语法错误This week is the last week before the Christmas day.People are all prepare for the Christmas and waiting for it.I decided to go Vancouver during boxing day because I want
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This is the last week before the Christmas day.People are all preparing for the coming of the Christmas.However,I decide to go to Vancouver,because I want to buy some cheap cloth on that day.I have made a plan for this trip with my friends.
We decide to get up at about half past five in the morning,and then catch up the first ferry at about 7.We will arrive in Vancouver at about 8:30.As there are many good places there for shopping,we will go to the Robson Street and Pacific Center Shopping Mall.For lunch,we are going to Richmond,because there are a lot of Chinese people and I also want to try some sea food.
Nevertheless,we didn't have a good time when we first went to Vancouver.As we didn't prepare enough for the trip,we just looked around.We also didn't get enough time for shopping.But for this time,it is a different one,because we have done much preparation.
I believe we will enjoy a good holiday.

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This week is the last week before the Christmas day. People are all preparing for the Christmas and waiting for it. I decided to go Vancouver
during boxing day because I want to bu...

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修改了一些语法：
This week is the last week before the Christmas day. People are all preparing for the Christmas and waiting for it. I decided to go Vancouver
during boxing day because I want to buy some cheap cloth.
I will go Vancouver with my friends and we made a plan for this trip. We decided to get up at about 5:30 in the morning and catch up the first ferry at about 7 and
we will arrive in Vancouver at about 8:30. Then we will go to Robson Street and Pacific Center Shopping Mall. .They are both good place for shopping. We are
going to have lunch at Richmond . There are a lot of Chinese there and I want to try some seafood there.
We didn't have a good time when we first went to Vancouver. We didn't prepared enough for the trip and we just looked around. We didn't get enough time for
shopping. This time is different because we are well prepared.

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是你自己写的吧，有点儿啰嗦，别介意。而且，写英文短文，忌讳重复用词，但是你一直在重复。