一篇英文自我介绍,Hello,everyone.First let me introduce myself.My name is Zou Hang.I’m 15 years old.I came from No.45 Middle School（不知道这里用middle school 还是用 junior high school）.In my spare time,I like reading short Engli

一篇英文自我介绍,Hello,everyone.First let me introduce myself.My name is Zou Hang.I’m 15 years old.I came from No.45 Middle School（不知道这里用middle school 还是用 junior high school）.In my spare time,I like reading short Engli
一篇英文自我介绍,
Hello,everyone.First let me introduce myself.
My name is Zou Hang.I’m 15 years old.I came from No.45 Middle School（不知道这里用middle school 还是用 junior high school）.
In my spare time,I like reading short English articles and listen to the English songs.I enjoy both of it,because it make me relaxed.Also,English films is my favorite.Sometimes I go to the theater to watch the English films that I like.According to all of this,I have great interested on English.
Sometimes I go to the English Corner to practice my speaking skills,and sometimes I write English letter to my friend.This all because I like English.Though I know my English is not so good,I’ll try my best on it,no matter how difficult it is.I believe that where there is a will,there is a way.
That’s all.Thank you.
是“改”不是“翻译”！

一篇英文自我介绍,Hello,everyone.First let me introduce myself.My name is Zou Hang.I’m 15 years old.I came from No.45 Middle School（不知道这里用middle school 还是用 junior high school）.In my spare time,I like reading short Engli
Hello,everyone.First let me introduce myself.
My name is Zou Hang.I’m 15 years old.I come from No.45 Middle School.
In my spare time,I like reading short English articles and listen to English songs.I enjoy both of them,because they make me relaxed.Also,English film is my favorite.Sometimes I go to the cinima to watch English films that I like.all in all,I have great interest in English.
Sometimes I go to the English Corner to practice my oral skills,and sometimes I write English letter to my friend.This is all because I like English.Although I know that my English is not so good,I’ll try my best working on it,no matter how difficult it is.I believe that where there is a will,there is a way.
That’s all.Thank you.

I like reading short English articles and listen to the English songs
listen 改成 listening
middle school和junior high school均可

你好,每一个人.首先让我介绍一下自己.
我的名字叫邹恒.我15岁.我来自67-89中学(不知道这里用中学还是用初中) .
在我的空余时间,我喜欢读英文短文章,听英文歌曲.我喜欢这两个,因为它使我relaxed.also ,英语影片,是我的最爱.有时我去电影院看英文电影,我很喜欢.根据这一切,我对此有很大的兴趣,对英语.
我有时去英语角练练我的说话技巧,有时,我会写英文...

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你好,每一个人.首先让我介绍一下自己.
我的名字叫邹恒.我15岁.我来自67-89中学(不知道这里用中学还是用初中) .
在我的空余时间,我喜欢读英文短文章,听英文歌曲.我喜欢这两个,因为它使我relaxed.also ,英语影片,是我的最爱.有时我去电影院看英文电影,我很喜欢.根据这一切,我对此有很大的兴趣,对英语.
我有时去英语角练练我的说话技巧,有时,我会写英文信给我的朋友.这一切,因为我喜欢英语.虽然我知道我的英语不是那么好,我将尽力而为,那无论是多么困难.我相信,只要有意愿,是有办法.

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Hello, everyone. First， let me introduce myself.
My name is Zou Hang. I’m 15 years old. I come from No.45 Middle School（middle school 初中 junior high school高中）.
In my spare time, I like reading...

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Hello, everyone. First， let me introduce myself.
My name is Zou Hang. I’m 15 years old. I come from No.45 Middle School（middle school 初中 junior high school高中）.
In my spare time, I like reading short English articles and listening to the English songs. I enjoy both of it, because they make me relaxable.Also, English films are my favorite hobby. Sometimes I go to the theater to watch the English films which I like. According to all of this, I have great interested in English.
Sometimes I go to the English Corner to practice my spoken skills, and sometimes I write English letters to my friend. I enjoy what i am doing because I like English. Though I know i am not good at English, I’ll try my best to learn it well, no matter how difficult it is. BecauseI believe that where there is a will, there is a way.
已改多处
现语法都正确了你自己看下

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I attend No.45 Middle School
listening to the English songs（要跟前面的reading搭啊～）
I enjoy both of them
because they relax me
I adore English movies as well
According to all of this,（这...

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I attend No.45 Middle School
listening to the English songs（要跟前面的reading搭啊～）
I enjoy both of them
because they relax me
I adore English movies as well
According to all of this,（这句很奇怪，不明白你的意思） I am really interested in English.
别用太多sometimes啦～～换这个once in a while吧
these are all because I love English
alThough I am not really good at English
这是写的还是要念的？如果是要写的话，尽量不要用缩写，例如i'll最好写成i will。这个是正式的写法，不要省略。如果是要念的话，那就没什么关系了。
初中吧？

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Also, English films is my favorite. 改为 English films is my favorite too.