帮我看下这句话语法对不对?The findings of this study concerned about what constraints to leisure do women and men experience,and how the context of personal does and situational circumstances (e.g.,age,income,and family structure) filter t

帮我看下这句话语法对不对?The findings of this study concerned about what constraints to leisure do women and men experience,and how the context of personal does and situational circumstances (e.g.,age,income,and family structure) filter t
帮我看下这句话语法对不对?
The findings of this study concerned about what constraints to leisure do women and men experience,and how the context of personal does and situational circumstances (e.g.,age,income,and family structure) filter the effects of constraints among women and men.

帮我看下这句话语法对不对?The findings of this study concerned about what constraints to leisure do women and men experience,and how the context of personal does and situational circumstances (e.g.,age,income,and family structure) filter t
有点错吧.有些地方用词有点怪:..context of..
The findings of this study demonstrated what constraints to leisure that women and men experience,and how the context of personal actions and situational circumstances filter the effects of constraints among women and men.