英语改错,十处i have received and read your letter,in which you said you want to lose weight by dieting.it is natural that young girls at your age hopes to look beaautiful.and in my opinion,health is more important than beanty do not let others'

英语改错,十处i have received and read your letter,in which you said you want to lose weight by dieting.it is natural that young girls at your age hopes to look beaautiful.and in my opinion,health is more important than beanty do not let others'
英语改错,十处
i have received and read your letter,in which you said you want to lose weight by dieting.it is natural that young girls at your age hopes to look beaautiful.and in my opinion,health is more important than beanty do not let others'ideas to affrct your normal life.if youdo want to lose wejght,it is good idea to do it by taking more will help you on your studies and help us get over difficulties on diteing.
i hope my advices will be helpful to you and i'm looking forward to hear from you soon.

英语改错,十处i have received and read your letter,in which you said you want to lose weight by dieting.it is natural that young girls at your age hopes to look beaautiful.and in my opinion,health is more important than beanty do not let others'
want —wanted
hopes—hope
and —but
to affect—to 删除
it is good idea—a good idea
taking more —加exercises 再从exercises后加which
help us —us 改成you
advices—advice
hear from—hearing
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I have received and read your letter,in which you said you want to lose weight by dieting. It is natural that young girls at your age hope to look beautiful. However, in my opinion, health is more imp...

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I have received and read your letter,in which you said you want to lose weight by dieting. It is natural that young girls at your age hope to look beautiful. However, in my opinion, health is more important than beauty and you should not let others' ideas to distract your normal life. If you do want to lose weight, it is a good idea to do it by doing more exercise and it will help you on your studies and help us get over difficulties on dieting. I hope my advices will be helpful to you and I'm looking forward to hear from you soon.

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I first met Li Ming ON a friend birthday party five years ago. Then I invited Li Ming over TO my place .We LISTENED to my CDs together

I have received and read your letter,in which you said that you want to lose weight by dieting. It is natural that young girls at your age hope to look beautiful.In my opinion,health is more important...

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I have received and read your letter,in which you said that you want to lose weight by dieting. It is natural that young girls at your age hope to look beautiful.In my opinion,health is more importanter than beauty ,do not let others'ideas to affect your normal life. if you do want to lose weight,it is a good idea to do it by taking more exercise,it will help you on your studies and help us get over difficulties on diteing.
I hope my advice will be helpful to you and I'm looking forward to hear from you soon.

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