I have bought the new mp3 for three days.这句话有什么语病哪?(单句改错)
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I have bought the new mp3 for three days.这句话有什么语病哪?(单句改错)
I have bought the new mp3 for three days.这句话有什么语病哪?(单句改错)
I have bought the new mp3 for three days.这句话有什么语病哪?(单句改错)
I had bought the new MP3 for three days, 你要表达的是前三天你就买了这个mp3,
如果用 I have bought the new MP3 for three days, 你要强调的是你告诉别人你现在有MP3了.
其实I have bought / I had bought 都没错,for three days 改为 three days ago更为恰当.
bought 改为 had /kept
因为for加的是一段时间,应该用延续性动词
如果要表示买的意思
也以这样改~
I bought the new mp3 three days ago
buy这个词属于瞬间动词,也就是动作发生在交易那一时刻,如果想表达买了三天,对应的买之后应该是拥有了三天,可以说成i have kept this new mp3 for 3 days或者说i bought the new mp3 three days ago.
类似的,英语里还有死die,一个人不能一直死,死是断气或大脑停止工作那一瞬间主体发生的动作,所以如果说他死了三天不能表示成he ...
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buy这个词属于瞬间动词,也就是动作发生在交易那一时刻,如果想表达买了三天,对应的买之后应该是拥有了三天,可以说成i have kept this new mp3 for 3 days或者说i bought the new mp3 three days ago.
类似的,英语里还有死die,一个人不能一直死,死是断气或大脑停止工作那一瞬间主体发生的动作,所以如果说他死了三天不能表示成he has died for 3 days,相应的应该表示成he has been dead...
本质来看,瞬间动作发生过后物或人处于一种持续的状态,如mp3 被kept,人处于dead的状态,所以表达时将物或人此时的状态表达出来就是正确的。
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for three days 改为three days ago
bought 改为 had