英语作文my favourite ____如题,填入生活有关的词语200词左右,比较口语化的朗读用的,楼下的那篇叶问写得不错，但是太长了，能不能缩短到250词左右？

英语作文my favourite ____如题,填入生活有关的词语200词左右,比较口语化的朗读用的,楼下的那篇叶问写得不错，但是太长了，能不能缩短到250词左右？
英语作文my favourite ____
如题,填入生活有关的词语
200词左右,比较口语化的
朗读用的,
楼下的那篇叶问写得不错，但是太长了，能不能缩短到250词左右？

英语作文my favourite ____如题,填入生活有关的词语200词左右,比较口语化的朗读用的,楼下的那篇叶问写得不错，但是太长了，能不能缩短到250词左右？
My favourite movie name is "IP MAN".
The story is about a Chinese man how to defeat a Japanese general.His name is YeWen.when he was young,he was a rich boy.He liked Kongfu name was Yongchun so much.He studied Yongchun every day.He practiced hardly that so many fighters have been defeated by him.
In 1937,Japanese army invaded China.So did his family.He became poor and he lived in a small house.He hadn't got enough food to eat.So he need a job cause he had to took care of his family.
One day,when he was working.A Japanese officer came to the factory and said"I want to find 10 fighters.My general will fight with you.If you win,you'll get a bag of rice!Who come with me?!"
Yewen knew if he went with him,he would not came back.He had to took care of his family.But one of his best friend Wu went with the Japanese officer.He wanted to defeat that general.Although he tried his best,he was also killed by general.A few days later ,Yewen still did not see his friend,he was worried about him.When that Japanese officer came to found fighters again.Yewen went with him that found his friend.When he arrived the arena.He saw many fighters were killed.He understood why his friend not came back.He was so anger.In order to avenge his friend.He stormed into the arena and defeated 10 Japanese fighters.The general was surprised,he decided to defeat him in front of the Chinese people by his Karate.For Chinese dignity and his friend,he accepted.Decisive battle of the day,so many Chinese people came to watch it.Finally,he defeated general.
This movie is action movie and the true stroy of the movie content.I like this movie because hero's national spirit.when I saw this movie I was electrify.That was so great movie!
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favourite movie name is "IP MAN".
The story is about how a Chinese man defeat a Japanese general.His name is YeWen.when he was young,he was a rich boy.He liked Kongfu named Yongchun so much,he studied Yongchun every day.He practiced very hard that many fighters was defeated by him.
In 1937,Japanese army invaded China.So did his family.He became poor and lived in a small house.He didn't have enough food to feed his family so he took a job working in a factory.
One day,when he was working.A Japanese officer came to the factory and said"I want to find 10 fighters.My general will fight with you.If you win,you'll get a bag of rice!Who would come with me?!"
Yewen knew if he went with him,he would not came back.He had to took care of his family.But one of his best friend Wu went with the Japanese officer.He wanted to defeat that general.Although he tried his best,but still,he was killed by general.Yewen started to worried about him since he hadn't shown up for a few days.When that Japanese officer came to found fighters again.Yewen went with him to find his friend.When he arrived the arena.He saw many fighters were killed.He understood why his friend didn't come back.He was so angry.In order to avenge his friend's death.He stormed into the arena and defeated 10 Japanese fighters.The general was surprised,he decided to defeat him in front of the Chinese people by Karate.For Chinese dignity and his friend,he accepted.When the day came,so many Chinese came to watch.Finally,he defeated the general.
This is an action movie based on a true story.I like it because of the hero's patriotic spirit and the perfect editing with those splendid fight scene.I was deeply moved and therefore it has earned the place in my heart.

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为什么喜欢（可以说喜欢演员，电影类型）
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给你点建议吧，谢谢电影，音乐，运动什么的都行。
比如电影，你可以这么写：
是什么电影
当初看这电影是在哪看的，为什么（比如家，便宜。电影院，视觉冲击）
电影得内容（简要概括）
为什么喜欢（可以说喜欢演员，电影类型）
最后说下自己的感觉（电影给你怎样的享受，喜欢去哪看电影什么的都行）

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