帮改几句英语As we know,friends are very important for us.We need friends,because without them,we'll feel lonely,we have nobody to talk to,we have nobody to share in the happiness and the sadness of the life; With our friends,we feel good,we can

帮改几句英语As we know,friends are very important for us.We need friends,because without them,we'll feel lonely,we have nobody to talk to,we have nobody to share in the happiness and the sadness of the life; With our friends,we feel good,we can
帮改几句英语
As we know,friends are very important for us.We need friends,because without them,we'll feel lonely,we have nobody to talk to,we have nobody to share in the happiness and the sadness of the life; With our friends,we feel good,we can learn much things,we can get a lot of knowledge what school can't teach us.

帮改几句英语As we know,friends are very important for us.We need friends,because without them,we'll feel lonely,we have nobody to talk to,we have nobody to share in the happiness and the sadness of the life; With our friends,we feel good,we can
写的还好,不过有几点语病：because without them最好改成without them因为because是连词,后面应接句子而不能接借此短语,without them是介词短语作原因状语；we have nobody to share in the happiness and the sadness of the life最好改成we have nobody to share my feeling in my life；much things最好改成many things,因为much修饰不可数名词的吧；we can get a lot of knowledge what school can't teach us.应该成we can get a lot of knowledge that school can't teach us.因为这里的that引导的是定语从句,而不能用what,what只能引导名词性从句.
最后祝愿您有大进步,我也正在学习英语.

As we know, friends are very important for us.We'll feel lonely without them.You see,we will have nobody to talk to,nobody to share the happiness and the sadness of our life; With friends, we will fee...

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As we know, friends are very important for us.We'll feel lonely without them.You see,we will have nobody to talk to,nobody to share the happiness and the sadness of our life; With friends, we will feel good, we can learn manythings from them, and get a lot of knowledge that schools can't teach us.
其实你自己写得蛮不错的啊，意思很连贯。不过要注意简洁，不要过于重复相同的部分，可以用其他词替代或者省略。另外，就是语法问题了。
希望可以帮到你哦。

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我们都知道，朋友对我们来说是非常重要的。我们需要朋友，因为如果没有他们，我们会感到孤单，我们没有人交谈，也没有人来分享我们生命中的快乐和悲伤；有了朋友，我们感觉良好，可以学到许多，可以得到许多学校里学不到的知识。
最后一句应该把what 改成that...

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我们都知道，朋友对我们来说是非常重要的。我们需要朋友，因为如果没有他们，我们会感到孤单，我们没有人交谈，也没有人来分享我们生命中的快乐和悲伤；有了朋友，我们感觉良好，可以学到许多，可以得到许多学校里学不到的知识。
最后一句应该把what 改成that

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