Hence every efforts from citizens or authorities should be put together to take care of our earth这句话写的对么?搭配对么?

Hence every efforts from citizens or authorities should be put together to take care of our earth这句话写的对么?搭配对么?
Hence every efforts from citizens or authorities should be put together to take care of our earth
这句话写的对么?搭配对么?

Hence every efforts from citizens or authorities should be put together to take care of our earth这句话写的对么?搭配对么?
不对efforts的s去掉,最后写take care for our earth
搭配么,好像不太准