高二的英语短文改错,短文如下：①Tired men was disscussing how to donate money to ②God ,and at first they couldn`t agree with each other .③Then each told their own idea .The first man suggested ④drawing a circle on the ground and t
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高二的英语短文改错,短文如下：①Tired men was disscussing how to donate money to ②God ,and at first they couldn`t agree with each other .③Then each told their own idea .The first man suggested ④drawing a circle on the ground and t
高二的英语短文改错,
短文如下：
①Tired men was disscussing how to donate money to ②God ,and at first they couldn`t agree with each other .③Then each told their own idea .The first man suggested ④drawing a circle on the ground and throw coins .The ⑤money out the circle belonged to God .The second ⑥man add ,"We will donate coins inside the circle to ⑦God because God is in our heart ." The third man said ,⑧" Your ideas are not bad ,though I have a better one .⑨Let`s throw coins into the sky .Those who God accepts ⑩belong to him .So God can accept so much money as he can ." At last they began throwing coins into the sky happily .
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高二的英语短文改错,短文如下：①Tired men was disscussing how to donate money to ②God ,and at first they couldn`t agree with each other .③Then each told their own idea .The first man suggested ④drawing a circle on the ground and t
1 was--were 因为后面有提到they
2 and--but 这个句子由句意来看是不需要并列链接的,but表示转折关系,这些人要给上帝捐钱但是无法达成共识
3 each--his 因为each已经表示了是这么多人中的一个,之前又提到了tired men 所以用his
4 throw--throwing parallel form 也就是并列结构, and链接的并列两个句子的动词的形态保持一致,前面用了drawing
5 out后面加of out of 表示在.的外面
6 add--added 因为全篇都是在用过去式的形式
7 heart--hearts our嘛,所以我们的 复数
8 √
9 who 去掉 Those已经代之金币了,没有必要用who来指代,而且东西（物）是不能被who指代的
10 so---as as much as 是固定词组 尽可能多 的意思
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