If I Were A Superwoman演讲稿if i were a superwoman,I would try my best to do something for the social.i'd like to do many,many things for people.if i were a superwoman,i world help others sincerely.i world always think of others first.if an old ma

If I Were A Superwoman演讲稿if i were a superwoman,I would try my best to do something for the social.i'd like to do many,many things for people.if i were a superwoman,i world help others sincerely.i world always think of others first.if an old ma
If I Were A Superwoman演讲稿
if i were a superwoman,I would try my best to do something for the social.i'd like to do many,many things for people.
if i were a superwoman,i world help others sincerely.i world always think of others first.if an old man wanted to cross the road,i world run up and help him.if i saw someone falling into the river,i would jump into the river to save him.because i can swim well.if somewhere caught fire,i world rush into the burning house,and rescue out inside people.then i would put out the fire.maybe i would hurt myself,but I would be happy if they can be safe.i’d love to help people in trouble.
If I were a superwoman,I world take action to help the children in poor areas.they don’t have enough money to go to school.i want to appeal to all the people for donating to them.please give them a chance to go to school.
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If I Were A Superwoman演讲稿if i were a superwoman,I would try my best to do something for the social.i'd like to do many,many things for people.if i were a superwoman,i world help others sincerely.i world always think of others first.if an old ma
if i were a superwoman,I would try my best to do something for the 【social【名词society】.
i'd like to do【 many,应该删去,这是中国英语的写法】many things for people.
if i were a superwoman,i【 world【 would 】
help others sincerely.i world【would 】
always think of【about】
others first.
if an old man wanted to cross the road,i world run up and help him.
if i saw someone falling into the river,i would jump into the river to save him.because i can swim well.
if somewhere caught fire,i world rush into the burning house,and rescue 【out删除】
inside people.then i would put out the fire.
maybe i would hurt myself,but I would be happy if they【 can be 改为were吧】safe.
i’d love to help people【who】 in trouble.
If I were a superwoman,I world take action【s】 to help the children in poor areas.they don’t have enough money to go to school.i want to appeal to all the people for donating to them.please give them a chance to go to school.
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social应该是society才对，你是想说社会吧？ 你这个是要演讲的，不是写好了交上去的吧？里面有很多拼写和标点符号的错误。如果光演讲，就没必要改了。 总体上，太中国式英语了。如果你是中学生，就这样吧，如果是大学生，建议你从新写写。

if i were a superwoman,I would try my best to do something for the social.i'd like to do many,many things for people.
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if i were a superwoman,I would try my best to do something for the social.i'd like to do many,many things for people.
if i were a superwoman,i world help others sincerely.i world always think of others first.if an old man wanted to cross the road,i world run up and help him.if i saw someone falling into the river,i would jump into the river to save him.because i can swim well.if somewhere caught fire,i world rush into the burning house,and rescue out inside people.then i would put out the fire.maybe i would hurt myself，but I would be happy if they can be safe.i’d love to help people in trouble.
If I were a superwoman,I world take action to help the children in poor areas.they don’t have enough money to go to school.i want to appeal to all the people for donating to them.please give them a chance to go to school.

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if i were a superwoman,I would try my best to do something for the 【social【名词society】.
i'd like to do【 many,应该删去，这是中国英语的写法】many things for people.
if i were a superwoman,i【 world【 would 】
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if i were a superwoman,I would try my best to do something for the 【social【名词society】.
i'd like to do【 many,应该删去，这是中国英语的写法】many things for people.
if i were a superwoman,i【 world【 would 】
help others sincerely.i world【would 】
always think of【about】
others first.
if an old man wanted to cross the road,i world run up and help him.
if i saw someone falling into the river,i would jump into the river to save him.because i can swim well.
if somewhere caught fire,i world rush into the burning house,and rescue 【out删除】
inside people.then i would put out the fire.
maybe i would hurt myself，but I would be happy if they【 can be 改为were吧】safe.
i’d love to help people【who】 in trouble.
If I were a superwoman,I world take action【s】 to help the children in poor areas.they don’t have enough money to go to school.i want to appeal to all the people for donating to them.please give them a chance to go to school.
检举 social应该是society才对，你是想说社会吧？ 你这个是要演讲的，不是写好了交上去的吧？里面有很多拼写和标点符号的错误。如果光演讲，就没必要改了。 总体上，太中国式英语了。如果你是中学生，就这样吧，如果是大学生，建议你从新写写。

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