To Whom It May Concern:I am writing to recommend Mr.Sun,one of my favorite students,foracceptance into your program.I got to know him personally when I teaching him a course namedE-commerce.I was surprised when I saw his work.I know young students ar

To Whom It May Concern:I am writing to recommend Mr.Sun,one of my favorite students,foracceptance into your program.I got to know him personally when I teaching him a course namedE-commerce.I was surprised when I saw his work.I know young students ar
To Whom It May Concern:
I am writing to recommend Mr.Sun,one of my favorite students,foracceptance into your program.
I got to know him personally when I teaching him a course named
E-commerce.I was surprised when I saw his work.I know young students are
creative,but it is not easy for them to calm down to realize it.It need smart
intelligence and strong perseverance.In my view,Mr.Sun has two aspects
above.
Mr.Sun can solve problem which he encountered quickly.For example,
I was troubled by ads in the Internet.So I talked with Mr.Sun,do he has some
solution to terminate all ads in the Internet.Mr.Sun thoughts he could make
it.After two days,he sent me a prototype which can prevent from all ads.It
is more advanced than present software which has same function to prevent from
ads.It can compatible with any browser.And then Mr.Sun also developed
software which can test fraud papers.It can use three formats such as TXT,
DOC,PDF.It can also batch Processing.All you need is just collect papers and
send papers to software.And then you will get detail information about every
paper like copy percentage,which word is copied.So I believe Mr.Sun has unique
point of view in programming.
I recommend Mr.Sun without reservation and shall appreciate yourfavorable consideration of her application.
Sincerely,

To Whom It May Concern:I am writing to recommend Mr.Sun,one of my favorite students,foracceptance into your program.I got to know him personally when I teaching him a course namedE-commerce.I was surprised when I saw his work.I know young students ar
1.第二段第一行,加was：when I was teaching him a course named E-commerce
2.need加s：It needs smart intelligence and strong perseverance.(smart用来修饰intelligence合适吗?)
3.In my view,Mr.Sun has two aspects above.这句话要表达的意思是什么?孙先生有以上两个方面?什么方面?上面也没说
4.Mr.Sun can solve problems which he encountered quickly.
5.on the Internet.
6.Does he have some solutions to terminate all the ads on the Internet.
7.Mr.Sun thought he could make it.
8.he sent me a prototype which can prevent all ads.(prevent from中间是人,prevent sb from)
9.has same function of prevent ads.
10.All you need to do is just collect papers and send them to the software.