求这篇英语短文的短文改错,It was a beautiful summer day,but we decided to take a long bike ride together.Since it was hot enough,we needed wear hats.On the half way,a strong wind blowing away Mike’s hat.We laughed so hardly when it fell

求这篇英语短文的短文改错,It was a beautiful summer day,but we decided to take a long bike ride together.Since it was hot enough,we needed wear hats.On the half way,a strong wind blowing away Mike’s hat.We laughed so hardly when it fell
求这篇英语短文的短文改错,
It was a beautiful summer day,but we decided to take a long bike ride together.Since it was hot enough,we needed wear hats.On the half way,a strong wind blowing away Mike’s hat.We laughed so hardly when it fell into the river that I didn’t notice the big tree in the front of me.As a result,the bike was badly damage and I fell onto the ground.Unfortunately,I was not hurt.Since we had gone too far and there was no help,we had no choice but take it home.Although it had only a short bike ride,we all went home in good spirits because the day has been such an adventure.

求这篇英语短文的短文改错,It was a beautiful summer day,but we decided to take a long bike ride together.Since it was hot enough,we needed wear hats.On the half way,a strong wind blowing away Mike’s hat.We laughed so hardly when it fell
It was a beautiful summer day,but（and,并且,不是转折） we decided to take a long bike ride together.Since it was hot enough,we needed （加上to,不定式） wear hats.On the half way,a strong wind blowing（blew,过去式） away Mike’s hat.We laughed so hardly（hard,副词） when it fell into the river that I didn’t notice the big tree in the（去掉the,多余） front of me.As a result,the bike was badly damage（damaged,被动语态） and I fell onto the ground.Unfortunately（Fortunately,幸运的是）,I was not hurt.Since we had gone too far and there was no help,we had no choice but take it home.Although it had（was,是） only a short bike ride,we all went home in good（high,情绪高涨的） spirits because the day has（had,过去完成时态） been such an adventure.

It was a beautiful summer day, but【改为and】 we decided to take a long bike ride together. Since it was hot enough, we needed【加to】 wear hats. On the half way, a strong wind blowing【blew】 away Mike’s hat....

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It was a beautiful summer day, but【改为and】 we decided to take a long bike ride together. Since it was hot enough, we needed【加to】 wear hats. On the half way, a strong wind blowing【blew】 away Mike’s hat. We laughed so hardly【hard】 when it fell into the river that【but】 I didn’t notice the big tree in the【去掉the】 front of me. As a result, the bike was badly damage【damaged】 and I fell onto the ground. Unfortunately【Fortunately】, I was not hurt. Since we had gone too far and there was no help, we had no choice but 【加上to】take it home. Although it had only【加上been】 a short bike ride, we all went home in good spirits because the day has【had】 been such an adventure.

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line 2 we needed [to] wear hats
a strong wind [blew] away
line 3 in the front of是指在某物的内部靠前的地方，把the去掉
line 4 the bike was badly damage[d]
Unfortun...

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line 2 we needed [to] wear hats
a strong wind [blew] away
line 3 in the front of是指在某物的内部靠前的地方，把the去掉
line 4 the bike was badly damage[d]
Unfortunately(不幸的是), I was not hurt.改成Fortunately
line 5 we had no choice but [to] take it home (have no choice but to sth.是固定句型)
line 6 because the day [had] been such an adventure

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but 改为 to ，blowing改为blew，hardly改为hard，damage改为damaged，had no choice but 后加to,in the front of 去掉the ，fell onto改为fell down，Unfortunately改为fortunately，Although it had 改为Although it was，has been改为 had been。