英语翻译When I was fourteen,I answered a pen-friend advertisement and started to write to a boy in the USA.He was twenty-one and I knew he wouldn't have written back if he had known my real age,so I told him I was eighteen.I even sent him a photo

英语翻译When I was fourteen,I answered a pen-friend advertisement and started to write to a boy in the USA.He was twenty-one and I knew he wouldn't have written back if he had known my real age,so I told him I was eighteen.I even sent him a photo
英语翻译
When I was fourteen,I answered a pen-friend advertisement and started to write to a boy in the USA.He was twenty-one and I knew he wouldn't have written back if he had known my real age,so I told him I was eighteen.I even sent him a photograph of my cousin.who is very beautiful.As time passed,his letters grew more affectionate,I shouldn't have,but I just played along,I was really horrible,my friends and I used to have a good laugh each time I received a letter from hime,by the time he told me that he loved me and that I was the most exciting girl he'd ever known,I didn't know what to do.I should have told him the truth then,but I didn't,because I didn't want him to feel stupid,so we continued writing to each other,when he told me he was coming to England,I was panicked.I wrote adn told him I was sorry but I'd just become engaged to a boy at home,he sent me a very sad letter wishing me every happiness,I felt really terrible.当我14岁时,我回复了一个笔友的广告,开始写一个在美国的男孩.他二十一岁如果他知道我的真实年龄不会给我回信的,所以我告诉他我18岁,我甚至寄给他一张表妹的照片.这是谁这么漂亮.随着时间推移他的信笺越来越深情,我不应该这么做,但我只是想一起玩.我真的很可怕.我每次收到他的信我和朋友笑得很开心,这个时候他告诉我他爱我.我是最令人激动的女孩,我不知道该做些什么.我当时应该告诉他真相,但是我没有,因为我不想让他感觉到愚蠢.所以我们继续写信给彼此,当他告诉我他要去英格兰,我惊慌失措,我告诉他我很难过,我恰好也和一个男孩订婚.他寄给我一封非常悲伤的信祝我幸福,我感觉糟透了.请高手帮我看看哪些地方翻译的有问题?

英语翻译When I was fourteen,I answered a pen-friend advertisement and started to write to a boy in the USA.He was twenty-one and I knew he wouldn't have written back if he had known my real age,so I told him I was eighteen.I even sent him a photo
当我14岁的时候,我在美国一个求笔友的广告上回复了一个男孩子然后开始和他通信.他当时已经21岁了,我明白如果他知道我的真实年龄他是不会给我回信的,所以我告诉他我18岁.我还曾给他发过我表姐的照片,我表姐长得很漂亮.随着时间的过去,他的信变得越来越充满柔情,我知道我不该继续了但我还是想一直玩下去.当时我真的很可怕,每次他寄来的信我都和我的朋友们一起肆意取笑,后来他写信告诉我他爱上我了,因为我是让他觉得最心动的女孩,我知道我应该告诉他真相,但是我没有,因为我不想让他觉得自己很愚蠢,所以我和他保持通信.直到他告诉我他准备要去英国,我才惊慌失措.我写信告诉他我很难过但是我在家乡已经和一个男孩子订过婚了,他很伤心地回信祝我幸福,我当时真的感觉糟透了.

When I
was fourteen,I answered a pen-friend advertisement and started to write to a boy
in the USA.He was twenty-one and I knew he wouldn't have written back if he had
known my real age...

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When I
was fourteen,I answered a pen-friend advertisement and started to write to a boy
in the USA.He was twenty-one and I knew he wouldn't have written back if he had
known my real age, so I told him I was eighteen. I even sent him a photograph of
my cousin.who is very beautiful.As time passed, his letters grew more
affectionate,I shouldn't have,but I just played along,I was really horrible,my
friends and I used to have a good laugh each time I received a letter from hime,
by the time he told me that he loved me and that I was the most exciting girl
he'd ever known,I didn't know what to do.I should have told him the truth
then,but I didn't,because I didn't want him to feel stupid,so we continued
writing to each other,when he told me he was coming to England,I was panicked.I
wrote adn told him I was sorry but I'd just become engaged to a boy at home,he
sent me a very sad letter wishing me every happiness,I felt really terrible
我十四岁的时候，我回答一个笔友的广告，开始写一个男孩在美国。他是二十一，我知道他不会有回了信，如果他知道我的真实年龄，所以我告诉他，我是十八。我甚至给他我的cousin.who照片是非常美丽的。随着时间的流逝，他变得更亲切的信，我不应该，但我只是玩了，真的很可怕的我，我的朋友和我有一个好的笑，每次我收到他一封信，他告诉我他爱我，我是他见过的最令人兴奋的女孩的时候，我不知道该怎么办。我应该把真相告诉了他，但我没有，因为我不想让他觉得自己很笨，所以我们继续写信给对方，当他告诉我他来了在英格兰，我吓坏了。我写了，告诉他我很抱歉但我刚订婚的在家里一个男孩，他送了我一个很难过的信祝我幸福，我觉得很可怕 正解

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