求检查英语作文并修改•My favourite flower is lotus .Every summer holidays,I always go to the lotus show .There is many beautiful lotus in it.There is many different kinds of lotus.It is colourful and pretty.It was lovely while it laste

求检查英语作文并修改•My favourite flower is lotus .Every summer holidays,I always go to the lotus show .There is many beautiful lotus in it.There is many different kinds of lotus.It is colourful and pretty.It was lovely while it laste
求检查英语作文并修改
•My favourite flower is lotus .Every summer holidays,I always go to the lotus show .There is many beautiful lotus in it.There is many different kinds of lotus.It is colourful and pretty.It was lovely while it lasted.The Northern Song Dynasty philosopher Zhoudunyi described it‘The mud,but not stained,wash clean ripple without demons.’ It opens in summer.It has the ornamental value.I love lotus very much.
•Q1:What is my favourite flower?
•Q2:How was the lotus while it lasted?
•Q3:Who described it?
•Q4:When does lotus open?

求检查英语作文并修改•My favourite flower is lotus .Every summer holidays,I always go to the lotus show .There is many beautiful lotus in it.There is many different kinds of lotus.It is colourful and pretty.It was lovely while it laste
There is那句,最后的in it可以删掉,因为there is本身就是那里有.的意思
时态要保持一致,第二行最后那句was应为is,而且lovely用在这里会不会不太合适?
taste为系动词,无被动
然后出淤泥而不染,濯清涟而不妖应是：It is not contaminated even growing in the muddy pond,and does not seem seductive even being washing off in clear water for years

第三句there be 句型是就进原则应该该改成there are many…然后去掉in it
it is colorful改成they are 因为是有好多花么

去掉in it
it is colorful改成they are 因为是有好多花么

it is colorful改成they are 因为是有好多花么..g';sdkgl;

There is那句，最后的in it可以删掉，因为there is本身就是那里有。。。的意思
时态要保持一致，第二行最后那句was应为is，而且lovely用在这里会不会不太合适？
taste为系动词，无被动
然后出淤泥而不染，濯清涟而不妖应是：It is not contaminated even growing in the muddy pond, and does ...

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There is那句，最后的in it可以删掉，因为there is本身就是那里有。。。的意思
时态要保持一致，第二行最后那句was应为is，而且lovely用在这里会不会不太合适？
taste为系动词，无被动
然后出淤泥而不染，濯清涟而不妖应是：It is not contaminated even growing in the muddy pond, and does not seem seductive even being washing off in clear water for years

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