Last Sunday I was helping my father in his teahouse when a foreign visitor entered in.I greeted her with a warmly smile and talked with her in English.The young lady,who called her Judy,came from Canada.she told me that it was the first time she has

Last Sunday I was helping my father in his teahouse when a foreign visitor entered in.I greeted her with a warmly smile and talked with her in English.The young lady,who called her Judy,came from Canada.she told me that it was the first time she has
Last Sunday I was helping my father in his teahouse when a foreign visitor entered in.I greeted her with a warmly smile and talked with her in English.The young lady,who called her Judy,came from Canada.she told me that it was the first time she has been in China and so far she had enjoined her stay there.All the people she met in the country were friendly for her.In the late afternoon I showed her around our town.After she left,Judy thanked me for my kind.Besides,she praised me for my spoken English.
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Last Sunday I was helping my father in his teahouse when a foreign visitor entered in.I greeted her with a warmly smile and talked with her in English.The young lady,who called her Judy,came from Canada.she told me that it was the first time she has
Last Sunday I was helping my father in his teahouse when a foreign visitor entered in（1、去掉in）.I greeted her with a warmly（2、改为warm） smile and talked with her in English.The young lady,who called her（3、改为herself） Judy,came from Canada.She told me that it was the first time she has been（4、改为was） in China and so far she had enjoied（5、改为enjoyed） her stay there（6、改为here）.All the people she met in the country were friendly for（7、改为to） her.In the late（8、Late放在开头） afternoon I showed her around our town.After（9、改为Before） she left,Judy thanked me for my kind（10、改为kindness）.Besides,she praised me for my spoken English.

1. last sunday I was... when ...entered=> last sunday when I was..., a foreign visitor entered in.

2. warmly => warm

3. who called her Judy=> herself

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1. last sunday I was... when ...entered=> last sunday when I was..., a foreign visitor entered in.

2. warmly => warm

3. who called her Judy=> herself

4. she has been in=> had been

5. she had enjoyed=>she enjoyed
   

6. her stay there=>here
   

7. were friendly for her=> to her

8. After she left=> before Judy left,

9. Judy thanked me=>she thanked me...

10. my kind=>kindness
    

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你好：
第一排：in 改为：with
第二排：warmly 改为：warm 去掉 her
第三排：has 改为：had stay 改为：staying there 改为：here
第四排：for 改为：to
第五排：kind 改为：kindness for 改为...

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你好：
第一排：in 改为：with
第二排：warmly 改为：warm 去掉 her
第三排：has 改为：had stay 改为：staying there 改为：here
第四排：for 改为：to
第五排：kind 改为：kindness for 改为：of
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