August 19.2009 wednesday rainyToday,The rain has never stopped,but it still very hot,At noon,My mother turned on the air-conditioner when we having lunch,we had lunch at twelve,we ate cabbages、meat、radish and rice.In the afternoon,My mother and I
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August 19.2009 wednesday rainyToday,The rain has never stopped,but it still very hot,At noon,My mother turned on the air-conditioner when we having lunch,we had lunch at twelve,we ate cabbages、meat、radish and rice.In the afternoon,My mother and I
August 19.2009 wednesday rainy
Today,The rain has never stopped,but it still very hot,At noon,My mother turned on the air-conditioner when we having lunch,we had lunch at twelve,we ate cabbages、meat、radish and rice.
In the afternoon,My mother and I were stay at home,We were not go anywhere,because it rains cats and dogs,My mother was played computer and learned shadow-boxing,I was read the English book——new concept English.
Mow it is quarter Past eighteen,We are going to have dinner at a moment,The dinner is ready!
August 19.2009 wednesday rainyToday,The rain has never stopped,but it still very hot,At noon,My mother turned on the air-conditioner when we having lunch,we had lunch at twelve,we ate cabbages、meat、radish and rice.In the afternoon,My mother and I
格式上,日期要靠右边.
我给你改一下.
Today,The rain has never stopped,but it （is）still very hot.At noon,My mother turned on the air-conditioner when we (were) having lunch.We had lunch at twelve.We ate cabbages、meat、radish and rice.
In the afternoon,My mother and I (stayed) at home,We (didn't go) anywhere,because it (was raining) cats and dogs.My mother (played) computer and learned shadow-boxing,I (read) the English book——new concept English.
Now it is quarter Past eighteen,We are going to have dinner (in) a moment.The dinner is ready!
楼主断句有问题哈~就几个简单的时态问题别的也没什么了:)
时态错了不少哦！其他还可以努力吧！