请各位帮我看看有没有错误Art is a wonderfulmediumthrough which we express our emotions,intellect and ideas.There are differentforms of art,including drawing,painting,photography and films.There are a lot of Applied Artssuch as,wood crafts,

请各位帮我看看有没有错误Art is a wonderfulmediumthrough which we express our emotions,intellect and ideas.There are differentforms of art,including drawing,painting,photography and films.There are a lot of Applied Artssuch as,wood crafts,
请各位帮我看看有没有错误
Art is a wonderfulmedium
through which we express our emotions,intellect and ideas.There are different
forms of art,including drawing,painting,photography and films.There are a lot of Applied Artssuch as,wood crafts,interior design and fashion design.I like art and
I want to use it to help me in the future.
In the future,I want to be a costume
designer.Art will give me inspiration.As a costume designer,I will need to
designing clothes that are aesthetically pleasing as well as functional.Drawing
will help me,I will draw my ideas on the papers,then working withdifferent
types of fabricsand patterns.
But,people’s opinions will change all the
time,so I need to follow the trend even lead the trend.I should keep my ideas
fresh,follow my heartand use myartinspirationto create great design.Good design,great fit and impeccable style are the hallmarks of a great
fashion design.
Art is a link to the world.Now,I have
enough time to study art.Because,with the help of art,my future with be
brighter.I will use my art skills to create great design and use different
types of fabrics to produce beautiful clothes.I want to realize my dream,so I
will study hard.

请各位帮我看看有没有错误Art is a wonderfulmediumthrough which we express our emotions,intellect and ideas.There are differentforms of art,including drawing,painting,photography and films.There are a lot of Applied Artssuch as,wood crafts,
好吧,今天周末,我来答!
总体一看,楼主貌似写了一片对艺术的忠诚作文.的说.
问题有几个：
1、英语表达：还不是很熟悉.如文中过多使用普遍的将来时态,换一下表达会不会好一点.
2、文章句型：平铺直叙的中文表达方式很多的,楼主可以看一下,多几个句型表达.而且第一人称普遍使用,导致重复和繁冗.
3、语法句法：开篇分别使用定语从句,给人亮点,很灵活；后面两个there be句型可以用两个不一样的表达方式.
4：表达：第二段之后问题较多：
As a costume designer,I will need to
designing clothes that are aesthetically pleasing as well as functional.Drawing
will help me,I will draw my ideas on the papers,then working withdifferent
types of fabricsand patterns
A:楼主看看你will 用了多少?
B:need to doing?有吗 是不是 need to do 或者 need doing?
这只是其一的不妥,我只是拿出这句话来分析,这样的表达还有的,楼主自己再看一下!
不懂再问,
翻译小新,

写得挺好的，没什么问题，除了几处空格没打好， wonderfulmedium，Artssuch，withdifferent，不过这估计是你打的时候没注意吧。但还有一处，I will draw my ideas on the papers，paper应该是不可数的，这里应该不要加“s”吧。个人的一点意见，希望对你有所帮助。