高一英语改错My friend Henry,with him I studied in the same class,didn’t like studying at school.That’s because he couldn’tgo to high school.He had to return back to his hometown,where his father wished him to learn to manage our smallshop

高一英语改错My friend Henry,with him I studied in the same class,didn’t like studying at school.That’s because he couldn’tgo to high school.He had to return back to his hometown,where his father wished him to learn to manage our smallshop
高一英语改错
My friend Henry,with him I studied in the same class,
didn’t like studying at school.That’s because he couldn’t
go to high school.He had to return back to his hometown,
where his father wished him to learn to manage our small
shop.However,the young man was not interesting in it and
didn’t do as his father said.He spends a lot of time reading
and learned how to repair cars.Last month,I accepted an
e-mail from him inviting me take my vacation in his
hometown.I started off.Seeing that he was so successful,
I said,“ Henry,all road lead to Rome.You are great.

高一英语改错My friend Henry,with him I studied in the same class,didn’t like studying at school.That’s because he couldn’tgo to high school.He had to return back to his hometown,where his father wished him to learn to manage our smallshop
I studied in the same class with my friend Henry.He didn't like to study at school.It is because he can't go to high school.He had to go back to his hometown,where his father wished him to learn how to manage our small shop.However,the young man was not interested in it and didn't do what his father said.He spent a lot of time reading and learning how to repair cars.Last month,I received an e-mail from him inviting me to take vacation in his hometown.I start to see that he was so successful.I said to him,"Henry,all roads lead to rome,you are great!".
这个文章好难读.语法不通顺并且很没有逻辑性.我不知道是不是要重新写.要是我的话我会把这个文章重新写一遍.如果这是你需要的话,

1. him改成whom
2. because改成why
3. 去掉back
4. our改成their/his
5. interesting改成interested
6. spends改成spent
7. accepted改成received
8. me和take中间加入to
9. 此行无错
10. road改成roads

1. him改成whom
2. because改成why
3. 去掉back
4. our改成his
5. interesting改成interested
6. spends改成spent
7. accepted改成received
8. me和take中间加入to
9. 此行无错
10. road改成roads
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