帮忙修正一下这篇简单的英文小短文的语法错误.My dreamMy friends often ask me what I want to be in the future .Maybe you think it’s a hard question ,but I think it’s easy .I hope I can to be a doctor in the future .because I thi

帮忙修正一下这篇简单的英文小短文的语法错误.My dreamMy friends often ask me what I want to be in the future .Maybe you think it’s a hard question ,but I think it’s easy .I hope I can to be a doctor in the future .because I thi
帮忙修正一下这篇简单的英文小短文的语法错误.
My dream
My friends often ask me what I want to be in the future .Maybe you think it’s a hard question ,but I think it’s easy .
I hope I can to be a doctor in the future .because I think a doctor is like an angle who wear a white coat .when some people are injured and hopeless ,doctors drag them out of the abyss of death .doctor is a sacred job ,and it is important .
In order to make the dream comes ture ,I must try my best to study ,because medicine is be based on our knowledge of school .I will study hard ,and learn about medicine as possible as I can.
The dream is my goal ,it make me harder an harder ,I won’t give up .

帮忙修正一下这篇简单的英文小短文的语法错误.My dreamMy friends often ask me what I want to be in the future .Maybe you think it’s a hard question ,but I think it’s easy .I hope I can to be a doctor in the future .because I thi
My dream
My friends often ask me what I want to be in the future .Maybe you think it’s a hard question ,but I think it’s easy .
I hope I can to be a doctor in the future .because I think a doctor is like an angle who（ wears) a white coat .when some people are injured and hopeless ,doctors drag them out of the abyss of death .doctor is a sacred job ,and(but) it is important .
In order to make the dream (come) ture ,I must try my best to study ,because medicine is be based on our knowledge of school .I will study hard ,and learn (more）about medicine as (possible---much) as I can.
The dream is my goal ,it make (s) me( work ） harder and harder ,I won’t give up .
希望会有所帮助!

I hope I can be a doctor in the future ,
who wears a white coat .
doctor is a sacred job which is important .
In order to make the dream come ture ,
I must try my best to study hard,
.I will study hard ,and learn about medicine as much as I can.
it makes me study harder and harder

1.can be a doctor,把to去掉
2.is based 把be去掉
3.把and it is important去掉，不知道哪里冒出来的一句
4.it make me harder an harder 这句很多错误，make要加s，me后面加个work，and你也写错了