帮忙看一下这段话有没有语法错误,As is vividly depicted in this cartoon,two handicapped young men are running fast with help each other.One of the disabled men only has his left leg.On the contrary,anther only has right leg.They discard

帮忙看一下这段话有没有语法错误,As is vividly depicted in this cartoon,two handicapped young men are running fast with help each other.One of the disabled men only has his left leg.On the contrary,anther only has right leg.They discard
帮忙看一下这段话有没有语法错误,
As is vividly depicted in this cartoon,two handicapped young men are running fast with help each other.One of the disabled men only has his left leg.On the contrary,anther only has right leg.They discard their crutches and believe that they can use their combined legs to travel north to south.From this picture we can realize the importance of cooperation,and it can always create a miracle. 


 

帮忙看一下这段话有没有语法错误,As is vividly depicted in this cartoon,two handicapped young men are running fast with help each other.One of the disabled men only has his left leg.On the contrary,anther only has right leg.They discard
As is vividly depicted in this cartoon,two handicapped young men are running fast with help of each other.One of them has a left leg.On the contrary,the other has a right leg.They discard their crutches and believe that they can use their combined legs to travel all over the world.From this picture we can see the importance of cooperation,which can always create a miracle.

3段help改helping are running fast换成run fastly 5段men改man 6段another换成the other 9段末尾加from 建议全文整修下，能把两句合成一个句子加从句的最好，only用的太多没有必要.

探讨一下，fast 可以当adv 用，所以个人觉得不应该用 fastly,is runnin fast是正确的，use their combined legs 让人不好理解。