The middle autumn day is an important festival in China.It’s very interesting and special.It’s in Augest and September.It’s on Augest 15th in lunar calendar.On that day,everyone in the family will help to make the house clean and beautiful.Fami

The middle autumn day is an important festival in China.It’s very interesting and special.It’s in Augest and September.It’s on Augest 15th in lunar calendar.On that day,everyone in the family will help to make the house clean and beautiful.Fami
The middle autumn day is an important festival in China.It’s very interesting and special.It’s in Augest and September.It’s on Augest 15th in lunar calendar.On that day,everyone in the family will help to make the house clean and beautiful.Families are together.We have a big,special dinner.We say happy the middle autumn day for all the good things we have.We can eat lots of mooncake.We can see the round moon,and we can see the program.We have a very funny day.
It is said that there was a dragon in the sky.The dragon wanted to swallow up the moon.To protect the fright the dragon away.
I like the middle autumn day!

The middle autumn day is an important festival in China.It’s very interesting and special.It’s in Augest and September.It’s on Augest 15th in lunar calendar.On that day,everyone in the family will help to make the house clean and beautiful.Fami
The Mid-Autumn Festival is an important festival in China. It’s very interesting and special. It is said that there was a dragon in the sky. The dragon wanted to swallow up the moon. To fright the dragon away and protect the moon, we have the Mid-Autumn Festival. It is held during Augest and September, on Augest 15th in lunar calendar. On that day, everyone in the family helps to clean the house and make it beautiful. Families meet each other and have a big, special dinner. We say "happy Mid-Autumn Festival" to all the good things we have. We can see the round moon, eat lots of mooncake and we can watch special TV shows for Mid-Autumn Festival. It is a very funny day.
I like the Mid-Autumn Festival!



只是修改了语意不同的地方和小细节,整体语法很好哦
几个注意一下的小地方：
英语里所有标点符号结束都要空一格
所有节日开头字母大写
一般情况下时态都要一致
太多it's开头了,老师会看腻的
it's 分开成it is,不仅强调后面接的内容,而且更加正式

It’s in Augest or September.因为中秋节就是一天，不可能是连着两个月份的，所以把and改成or。

’everyone in the family will help to make the house clean and beautiful‘
这句想表达的大概是all the family members will work together in order to clean up the house吧
We say happy the middle autumn day ...

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’everyone in the family will help to make the house clean and beautiful‘
这句想表达的大概是all the family members will work together in order to clean up the house吧
We say happy the middle autumn day for all the good things we have”
on that day，as a tradition，we will apreciate all the good things we have

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The middle autumn day is an important festival in China.The very interesting and specia festival between Augest and September is on Augest 15th in lunar calendar,while everyone in the family will help...

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The middle autumn day is an important festival in China.The very interesting and specia festival between Augest and September is on Augest 15th in lunar calendar,while everyone in the family will help to make the house clean and beautiful.Getting together we have a big and special dinner.We say happy the middle autumn day for all the good things we have.We can eat lots of mooncake.We can see the round moon,and enjoye theTV program.What a very funny day.
It is said that there was a dragon in the sky.The dragon wanted to swallow up the moon.To protect the fright the dragon away.
I like the middle autumn day!

To protect the fright the dragon away.是什么意思？

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