请各位帮忙检查一下这段英文有没有错The moon can't shine,but you are the glowing pearl.Nobody wants to stop you.And nobody can stop you.Sometimes,you sing;Sometomes,you dance.You can shine,so you are beautiful.Do you know?So I like you

请各位帮忙检查一下这段英文有没有错The moon can't shine,but you are the glowing pearl.Nobody wants to stop you.And nobody can stop you.Sometimes,you sing;Sometomes,you dance.You can shine,so you are beautiful.Do you know?So I like you
请各位帮忙检查一下这段英文有没有错
The moon can't shine,
but you are the glowing pearl.
Nobody wants to stop you.
And nobody can stop you.
Sometimes,
you sing;
Sometomes,
you dance.
You can shine,
so you are beautiful.
Do you know?
So I like you!

请各位帮忙检查一下这段英文有没有错The moon can't shine,but you are the glowing pearl.Nobody wants to stop you.And nobody can stop you.Sometimes,you sing;Sometomes,you dance.You can shine,so you are beautiful.Do you know?So I like you
不影响表达.
这是情书啊,很诗意.
不要为语法所牵绊,只要是真心写下,重在情意,语法都是浮云.

Daphne changes into a laurel tree to avoid being chased by Apollo. 可以把原文的chasing改成being chased. A handsome man change into the narcissus