英语翻译I am a 14 years OLD student,the daily learningtasks are heavy,butl ife after school life is full of joy,it brings me a lot of fun and takes away my sadnessI have many hobbies,such as p aying the piano drawing do some sports and so on I Ii

英语翻译I am a 14 years OLD student,the daily learningtasks are heavy,butl ife after school life is full of joy,it brings me a lot of fun and takes away my sadnessI have many hobbies,such as p aying the piano drawing do some sports and so on I Ii
英语翻译
I am a 14 years OLD student,the daily learningtasks are heavy,butl ife after school life is full of joy,it brings me a lot of fun and takes away my sadness
I have many hobbies,such as p aying the piano drawing do some sports and so on I Iike art because I think Each color just like expressing different feelings to others.I think they are little elf elf这个的复数?
At first,I do not like playing the piano,but as As I grew older
,I found the charm of the music Behind each song contains many stories are,I can not help but want to understand the implication of its secret
,I m happy when ,I m pinging the piano,Feeling very relaxed
I like listening to pop music,I think they are great,warm and fast songs,slow songs tenderness,
I have to cram in extra-curricular,in which I learned a lot of knowledge,but also make friends,
My extracurricular life full and happy,though a bit busy,but rewarding
One cannot make an omelet without breaking eggs.
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英语翻译I am a 14 years OLD student,the daily learningtasks are heavy,butl ife after school life is full of joy,it brings me a lot of fun and takes away my sadnessI have many hobbies,such as p aying the piano drawing do some sports and so on I Ii
第一句：太长了也就是英文中的run-on sentence.不如把第一句变成两个句子?句子最后有句号
第二句：playing 不是 paying.并且我发现你在列举事物的时候没有标点（逗号）.so on 后面有句号.
第三句：each color IS like 不是 Each color just like.elf的复数是elves.并且是i think they are LIKE little elves.
第四句：each song THAT contains many stories 结束.
错误太多了.我把你的文章都给改对了.如下：
I am a 14 years old student,the daily learning tasks are heavy,but life after school life is full of joy.It brings me a lot of fun and takes away my sadness.
I have many hobbies,such as playing the piano,drawing,do some sports and so on.I Iike art because I think each color is like expressing different feelings to others.I think they are little elf elves
At first,I do not like playing the piano,but as As I grew older,I found the charm of the music.Behind each song contains a story,I can not help playing the piano but want to understand the implication of its secret.
I m happy when ,I m playing the piano,Feeling very relaxed.I also like listening to pop music,I think they are great,warm and fast songs and feeling the slow songs' tenderness.
I have to cram in extra-curricular,in which I learned a lot of knowledge,but also make friends.
My extra curricular life is full and happy,although a bit busy,but rewarding.
One cannot make an omelet without breaking eggs.
顺便说一句.你这文章主题不明确.开头说跟主题没有太大关联,并且内容也不着边.

我是一个14岁的学生,每天的学习任务很重,butl演练课余生活充满了欢乐,它给我带来了很多乐趣,夺去我的忧伤
我有很多爱好,如p有钢琴图纸做些运动等。我喜爱艺术,因为我认为每种颜色就像表达不同的心情给别人。我认为他们是小精灵elf这个的复数? ?
首先,我不喜欢弹钢琴,但当我长大的
我发现的魅力,每首歌的音乐背后的故事都是包含有许多,我不禁想了解的涵义和它的秘密
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我是一个14岁的学生,每天的学习任务很重,butl演练课余生活充满了欢乐,它给我带来了很多乐趣,夺去我的忧伤
我有很多爱好,如p有钢琴图纸做些运动等。我喜爱艺术,因为我认为每种颜色就像表达不同的心情给别人。我认为他们是小精灵elf这个的复数? ?
首先,我不喜欢弹钢琴,但当我长大的
我发现的魅力,每首歌的音乐背后的故事都是包含有许多,我不禁想了解的涵义和它的秘密
快乐的时候,我的钢琴,我鸣警笛,感觉很轻松
我喜欢听流行音乐,我认为他们是伟大的、温暖的和快速的歌曲,慢歌温柔,
我必须在课外补习,在这里我所感受到的是学到了很多的知识,更重要的是要结交朋友,
我的课余生活充实和快乐,虽然有点忙,但令人欣慰的
一个人不能让天下没有白吃的午餐。

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