求英语高手帮忙修改一下英文简历,看看有没有基本的语法错误什么的,**M/F:Male · Date of Birth:04/25/1984Mobile phone:+86- Shanghai\x05Main Job Description：Deposition of various buffer layers for coated conducto

求英语高手帮忙修改一下英文简历,看看有没有基本的语法错误什么的,**M/F:Male · Date of Birth:04/25/1984Mobile phone:+86- Shanghai\x05Main Job Description：Deposition of various buffer layers for coated conducto
求英语高手帮忙修改一下英文简历,看看有没有基本的语法错误什么的,
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M/F:Male · Date of Birth:04/25/1984
Mobile phone:+86- Shanghai
\x05Main Job Description：Deposition of various buffer layers for coated conductors on textured Ni-5%W tapes using reel-to-reel DC reactive sputtering
\x05Experimental Methods:Experience in DC reactive sputtering and Pulsed laser deposition (PLD)- Deposited high quality films; X-ray diffraction scans and pole figures- Evaluate biaxial texture of the grown films; Atomic force microscopy (AFM) and SEM- Observe the microstructure of the grown films; PPMS- Measure superconductive transition temperature and critical current density
\x05Main Participating Projects:Science and Technology Commission and Ministry of Science and Technology of China .Meeting Participation- The 11th national superconducting seminar
Publications
\x05Deposition buffer layers for coated conductors on textured NiW tapes using reel-to-reel DC reactive sputtering (in prepared)
\x05Epitaxial growth of buffer layers for coated conductors

求英语高手帮忙修改一下英文简历,看看有没有基本的语法错误什么的,**M/F:Male · Date of Birth:04/25/1984Mobile phone:+86- Shanghai\x05Main Job Description：Deposition of various buffer layers for coated conducto
首先每一项分的清晰点比较好哦~是要求职吗?
如：
一. Personality Information: 不用写M/F,写Gender 就可以了,你应该再加一些,Nationality, Political Status,and so on.
二. Education Background 一般是从大学写到高中,你教育这里最好画个表,一一对应,时间,毕业学校,学历,专业,备注,描述你学习方向
三. 工作经验这个,时间也是要从离你最近的开始写,即先写2011-present
最后最好再加个自我评价Self-assessment 哦~
希望对你有帮助哦~